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by Girlwithideals

schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:O poor naru! *continues reading what happens next*
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUM DUM DUUUUM! *is on the edge of her seat now*
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gasps* DAMN YOU OROCHIMARU! Don't take naru away!

Hehehe
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GO NARU GO! You tell them! WOO!
*eeps!* I'm loving this so far hehe
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know... this revelation to Gaara (if we didn't already know that Naruto was faithful) would seem really like a confession with the way he embraced the red head and told him his condition. I wold almost assume Gaara was the father if I didn't know better. I hope Itachi remembers to know better. >:) hehehe

Although I am immensely glad that Naruto can count back the days of his conceiving to when they were in Sand. Not that I'm not sure Sasuke will try to stir trouble by staking a claim to fatherhood of the child just to piss Itachi off. Is he really that stupid? Possibly. I'm not sure (although I hope not. I like how happy Naruto is with Itachi.)

Keep up the great work!
person dino1
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Itachi is going to be so jealous about Gaara.
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay he's preggie!!! and poor Itachi Lol, he has to tolerate Naruto's mood for the next several months better to have Gaara keep him calm for a while. and thanks for introducing Shino. :) *passes you chocolate fudge, walnut brownies*
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! wow *giggles* aww i hope naruto give itachi more attention, I wonder if gaara might curse itachi's exsistence lol. *huggles naruto's stomach* *blood drains from face* i-it's itachi's... r-rite? *glares at sasu-teme!* ja ne!

_Phantom_ ♥
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Mpreg! =) Hopefully it's ONLY Itachi's, I'd would suck if the baby/babies were Sasuke and Itachi's, because it's like that in EVERY fic I've ever read. It's getting a little boresome.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
person qwerty
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It'll be funny to see Gaara's reaction to that!