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by Girlwithideals

schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww *tears* he didn't tell him, but yay! he told itachi he loved him! I can imagine it in my head naru's cute little voice saying "Daisuki!" aww *hug* that's rite sasuke! Leave!!!! lol arigatou! cant wait 2 see wat's next! ja ne Rose-sama!

_Phantom_ ♥ (my real nickname is Jewels lol)
person Unknown_lily
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
an interesting turn of events is all i can say
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They marked each other!! =^^=

This makes me happy. :D
person Kohaku
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. It has a good plot. You are going to continue right?Well I look forward to reading more, hopefully soon. I got a bloody nose from the smut XD I love it!! I seriously need to find more to read now...hmmmm
person fan
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe evil sasuke i like it^_^
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think Sasuke is going to feel VERY guilty about raping Naruto. he just proven to his brother that he IS more like his father, but much worse. pray for karma!
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the story...poor naruto that was so sad itachi should kick his lil' brother's but or let the snake have him for what he did to naruto. please update soon
person Unknown_Lily
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter! I really didn't like the rape ,but I'm glad it wasn't descriptive, as long as the story has a happy ending for naruto then i'm willing to keep reading on.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries* kill him itachi!!!!!!!!! (sasuke) aw is naruto gunna tell? Gaara go assasinate sasuke! zing! Orochimaru should get ahold of sasuke *meh hehh*! lol (sorry my mind is on revenge for Naru-chan!) lol plot bunnies! gyahhhh *sits by computer waiting for next chapter* it's getting VERY interestin! ja ne! Keep on rockin girlwithideals-sama! (do u have a nickname I can call u? *puppy dog eyes* plz?)

_Phantom_ ♥
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*hides* sorry for re-reviewing but I could find out how 2 message u. I found a couple online mangas-inprocess and thought u'd like them ( I love honeydew syndrome exspcly) *ne one else might like them 2, but i thought of a gift 4 u for taking my idea offer into ur story!!* http://www.honeysyn.net/ and http://vampirates.comicgenesis.com/archives.html
(hunydue syn is about a jock and a rocker/weirdo fallin in love) (vamprites has a little mystery about what's happinin so i guess the site will expln mor) taht is if ur not busy lol~! thx ja ne!

_Phantom_ ♥