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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It looks really good so far. It's just... You kind of rush things. You put 'Itachi nodded and watched his brother walk out of the room'. Sometimes there really isn't any emotion behind the actions of the character. I dunno...
But otherwise, it's really great.
But otherwise, it's really great.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I do hope you continue.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah.... I kinda agree to you that it did need to happen. Sasuke would have had to try something. I'm just surprised Naruto didn't try to disfigure him more than just a kick. (Although rape can be one of those paralyzing things... so I can also understand. :( )
I hope Itachi can overcome what happened to Naruto. He was so distraught when Naruto was missing for a night. You'd almost think Naruto marked HIM>>> Gaara needs kill Sasuke. I'd say Itachi, but its his brother, and that just would be messy.
Keep up the great work!!!
I hope Itachi can overcome what happened to Naruto. He was so distraught when Naruto was missing for a night. You'd almost think Naruto marked HIM>>> Gaara needs kill Sasuke. I'd say Itachi, but its his brother, and that just would be messy.
Keep up the great work!!!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grrr, I feel like busting right up side Sasuke's head with a rolling pin. Anyway the image of Itachi running around in a panic, attacking anything and anyone (Sasuke,snickersXD!) just because he couldn't find Naruto LOL! And obviously he'll suspect Sasuke first before anyone else! God finally, Sasuke's leaving? Well at least Naruto can finally have some peace from that horny beast, Sasuke needs to get himself fixed.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Brat.....GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he's no different from his father, god i hope Naruto tells Itachi it's not fair for Naruto to suffer like this!
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Sasuke, what an asshole. Even after Itachi's talk with him about not becoming their father... *shakes head*
Itachi is gonna flip when he finds out what Sasuke did. I mean, Itachi became crazy when he couldn't find Naruto; I can't imagine what he'll be like later on.
Itachi is gonna flip when he finds out what Sasuke did. I mean, Itachi became crazy when he couldn't find Naruto; I can't imagine what he'll be like later on.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that clearly changed my opinion about Sasuke, he can go to hell! Damn, how dare he do that to poor Naru-chan! *growls*
So thanks for that! ItaNaru forever! Yay!
But you have to make Naruto tell Itachi about the rape, cause I'd love to see Itachi kick Sasuke's ass, that's actually one of the highpoints in my life ^_^ Hehe. I'm like "you go Itachi" infront of the computer when that happens! XD
So keep up with the good work, can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
So thanks for that! ItaNaru forever! Yay!
But you have to make Naruto tell Itachi about the rape, cause I'd love to see Itachi kick Sasuke's ass, that's actually one of the highpoints in my life ^_^ Hehe. I'm like "you go Itachi" infront of the computer when that happens! XD
So keep up with the good work, can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shadows: damn you duckbut *raises an army of duckbutt haters* lets go get him!
Twi: duckbutt=Sasuke
Ruki: *polishes katana* but I just cleaned this
Twi: duckbutt=Sasuke
Ruki: *polishes katana* but I just cleaned this
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that Itachi is eventually going to kick sasuke butt.
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE ANGST!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE MPREG!!!