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Well, sasuke can't be a good guy all the time. I think it worked. Will he come back to the castle a better man? Itachi is just so sweet in this fic. Oh my god the 'you said that out loud' line made me chortle! Very good work. I like this story a lot.
Just one grammatical thing that took me forever to get a hold of, and sry if this pisses you off, but watch you to's. In situations like 'Hey can i come too?' and 'this is just too much.' you need to use too not to. I know it took me ages to get that right. So not a big deal but someone pointed it out to me a while ago and i do find it helps. Again sry if that annoyed you and feel free to disregard. I know sometimes i wanted to pound people who made comments like that on my stuff. It makes a big difference to have a beta let me tell you!
Anyway, most excellent chapter.
Cheers
Meg

good story can't wait until the next update

Shadows: aw poor Naruto has a sore ass. He better get used to it though its probably going to be happening a lot. XD
Twi: perv...
Ruki: Wonder what Sasuke's going to do...

*HUGS TIGHTLY* OMG! yay Gaara! he was so mysterious and smooth (in a kinda bad ass way) *hearts in eyes* I'm sorry! too happie. Thx so much (again, again lmao) I wonder if sasuke's gunna give up? to the next chappie lol!

_Phantom_ ♥

Good chapter. I assume Gaara is a full demon?

Hmm... so Sasuke's just going to ignore Naruto? Somehow he just doesn't seem the type to turn down revenge. (I wonder where I got that notion from, eh? >:) )


I hope Naruto and Gaara become fast friends in this.
Keep up the great work. ^^

Hehe. I really like this story. It's funny aswell as droolworthy and exciting.
And of course, it has ItaNaru! Yay! My favorite pairing. XD Thanks for the lemon! ;P
But eventhough I prefer Itachi being with Naruto I can't help feeling sorry for Sasuke. I guess I'm a big SasuNaru fan aswell, but I don't know, I'm so confused...
Anyway, just ignore me XD. Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

heh heh, Naruto will get used to sex eventually he know he liked it!!! lol, and for Sasuke who knows maybe he'll end up wtih Gaara or unless he with Lee or somewhat (usually a common pairing). But great chapter though
*gives out browines*

OOO, I love me some Gaara! I wonder what kind of role he'll play in this story. And it looks like Sasuke has finally buggered off Naruto at last...or has he?

I really liked this chapter! Particularly the fact that sasuke left naruto alone and that gaara seems like a good option for a friend for naruto.
I'll be waiting for your update!