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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeh sorry about that first review, I got a little distracted and messed up. :S
Any ways. I do like this story a lot and the plot is coming a long nicely, in my opinion.
Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
*bows again to apologize again for the screw up*
Huggles
Any ways. I do like this story a lot and the plot is coming a long nicely, in my opinion.
Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
*bows again to apologize again for the screw up*
Huggles
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So, I just started this story today, and I must say, it's rather good. A few little grammatical errors here and there (just watch out when you're switching the p.o.v., sometimes you have the characters thinking their own names) but on the whole, very good. I can't wait to read more of this!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you update fast. Last time i saw this one on the new page and read it i was at ch. 10. Love where this is going. Poor Naruto, so innocent and in heat ta boot. Can't wait for someone to deflower his virgin ass. wow. that was lewd even for me. Sry. i'm a little hopped up on cold medication right now. Please update soon!!!!
Cheers
Meg
Cheers
Meg
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello; I'm reviewing and rating!
And just so that you know the reason you might not be getting so many reviews, is because a lot of people that read on AFF, don't have AFF accounts. So they can't review!
And just so that you know the reason you might not be getting so many reviews, is because a lot of people that read on AFF, don't have AFF accounts. So they can't review!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just voted and rated this! if i have to, i'll do it a thousand times if i have pleeeeeeeaaasssse continue this story!!!!! and chapter 17 was good also and thanks for answering my question. as for chapter 18, LAMO!!!! my friends can't stop laughing at this.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto nobody told him he was in heat.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shadows: here I fed you now you feed me. O_o don't make me use my awesome yaoi moofins of doom!
Twi: -_-' well we just filled our insane quota for today
Ruki: Agreed.
Twi: -_-' well we just filled our insane quota for today
Ruki: Agreed.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chappy. How much longer before ItaNaru action?
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, i voted and now i'm reviewing ...;-p
geez, i stink at reviews, so i'll just say cute fic, and how many chapters will this be? and when will the romance appear? yep, romantic to the core ... that's me!
geez, i stink at reviews, so i'll just say cute fic, and how many chapters will this be? and when will the romance appear? yep, romantic to the core ... that's me!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! Thx so much for writting this fic! I'm in love! lol. I can't wait to see what naruto does next. Sorry for not reviewing! actually this is my first review! I think gaara would be awsome to put in ur fic! u'know to be naruto's close friend or something and itachi and sasuke start becoming jealous lol, but it's ur writting so I can't waiting for chappie 19! thx again! ja ne!
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