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by Girlwithideals

schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Smug.


Neji is so goddamn smug. lol
Keep up the good work. ^^
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Sasuke... reformed?? I never thought I'd live to see the day. Although the fact that Sasuke willingly sells himself off as Kisame's bitch after realizing the protection it provides does speak to Sasuke's character. It's funny when you think that this kind of behavior really isn't ooc at all.


Keep up the good work!
person a kitsunes light
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor sasuke! But Iam happy he finally realized that what he was doing was wrong and that he understands why neji didi it.
Also I loved naruto's delivery and the after, it is just Soooo Cute!!!!!
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Naru-chan and Ita-kun had triplets! Wee! And wow... Kisame? I'm starting to feel sorry for Sasuke........ Nah. Aw, Neji's not coming back? That's okay, though. He was used for the greater good. ^_^ When do I get to see that mini green beast, Lee, again? I hope soon, it took you a while for this update, but authors have lives like everyone else. It was totally worth the wait, though. Tell Naruto and Itachi I'm willing to babysit anytime! *squeals* They're so cuuuuuuuute!
person mls1971
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chappie! Aw... Yuu-chan has taken a liking to Gaara! And Lee is good with kids! I can totally see Itachi and Naruto's children being like they are. I like Raidan, lol ^_^ He's a perfect blend of Uchiha and Uzumaki. Challenging, defiant, as well as possessive and protective of Naru-chan- wait, that just tipped it to Uchiha. Can't wait for your next update!
person mls1971
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yay!!!! happy day happy day!!! passes out a bouquet of flowers and a thank you card!!! and the babies are sooo adorable! <3
person qwerty
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap. Will Neji actually let Sasuke be free? Interesting...
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hello, just checking to see if you updated yet, take your time your fans are willing to wait a little longer. :)