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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I personally don't like authors holding their chapters hostage for reviews, whether it's for 3 reviews or 300. It's not the amount demanded that's the issue, it's the principle of the matter. Granted, authors work hard on their writing, and wanting some feedback on how to improve or knowing what the readers liked about the chapter is NOT unreasonable. That being said, it's within the reader's full right to review or not; just like it's in the author's full right to post new chapters or not. Maybe it's my Western, individualistic, idealistic up-bringing but forcing anybody to do anything just to get something that's normally "free" kinda grates on my nerves. Yes, readers SHOULD review (even if it's only one line), but I don't think they should be MADE to just to know what happens next. *shrugs* Anyway, that's my opinion, which is NOT meant to be offensive; it's just a statement of how I feel.
Now, on to my review: I would have thought that Sasuke would have learned to control himself since he doesn't want to be like his father anymore. Hmmm... I wonder if even Itachi will make a move now that Naruto's more susceptible to advances because of his hormones. Both Naruto and Itachi seem to like each other (more so on Itachi's part, of course). You wrote that Naruto was locked inside his house whenever he went into heat. Does that mean that Naruto's mother knew what was going on and just decided to not confine it to Naruto?
Great chapter!
Now, on to my review: I would have thought that Sasuke would have learned to control himself since he doesn't want to be like his father anymore. Hmmm... I wonder if even Itachi will make a move now that Naruto's more susceptible to advances because of his hormones. Both Naruto and Itachi seem to like each other (more so on Itachi's part, of course). You wrote that Naruto was locked inside his house whenever he went into heat. Does that mean that Naruto's mother knew what was going on and just decided to not confine it to Naruto?
Great chapter!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah baby ... SNAP!!! sasuke got put in his place, yeah! at first i wasn't too keen on having the same situation replayed three times with three POVs but understand why you arranged it that way.
keep it up!
keep it up!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY, another update!! Keep it up, and the good work XD!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
About time Sasuke got knocked down a peg.
update
update
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch. 16 was great, but also sad. thier father was a bastard. but i wanna know did he die also or his kids end up killing him? let us know :)
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Verbal slap to the face with Sasuke! Ha! Talk about harsh reality check. >:)
You can almost feel bad for Sasuke, until you remember he's a spoiled rotten prick. (lol)
Keep up the good work!
You can almost feel bad for Sasuke, until you remember he's a spoiled rotten prick. (lol)
Keep up the good work!
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot damn! back and better than ever! and wow after 14 chapters those two finally have a get-go at each other too bad they were caught though! thank you, you just made my day! :)
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap!!! Caught by Sasuke!!!!! bwahahahahahahahahaa!!! =^^=
While I'm rooting for Itachi and Naruto, I wonder what it will mean for Sasuke if his mate sleeps with someone else.
While I'm rooting for Itachi and Naruto, I wonder what it will mean for Sasuke if his mate sleeps with someone else.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this. I love you. Please update soon! Pretty please with a lemon on top? It'll be really ripe and citrusy, I promise! Well... only if you go on ff.net under mangatemptresshikaru and tell me who you are. Gomen. ;D
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i showed tis to my friends and they're hooked! they wanna read the next chapter and i said come on give the author some breathing room :) LOL!