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by Girlwithideals

person Becky
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I so love this story!!!! To keep this short and sweet UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha. It all ended well, didn' it! ;P
Oh, Sasuke you're such a pervert. It's so hilarious and great that he can't get what he wants from Naruto. Cause that for Itachi to take, I hope ;)
Thanks again for updating so fast aswell as writing this story. You rock!
Keep up with the good work, as always, and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAAHAHA MWAHWHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHhahahahahhahahahah aaahhahahhahahahahahaha ahehehehhehehehehehehehe h=^^=


This whole thing has been very OOC, but FINALLY there's the blonde we all know and love!! mwahahaha!

^^ Keep up the good work. Enjoy your vacation. :D
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh Heh, score one for Itachi!
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
six months with that pervert?! agh! but i know itachi will think of something thanks again! :)
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Thank you for writing and updating the chapters so fast. No one of the other authors to that so you're really something.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
*give you cookies*
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Six months!!! Torture.. sweet torture!!! Some how I don't think Naruto's innocence will last through the month. >:) hehehe

Keep up the great work!
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! i read ch.11 and 12 and wow! it's getting good in the end of ch. 12 why are virgin demons so important anyway?
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They have a spy!!!

It seems to me like the Uchiha brothers tend to cock block each other when it comes to gaining Naruto's affections. Hmm... Maybe they should share. >:) hehehe (Ok, ok.. that would seem terribly out of line for this story, but its fun to think about. hehehe)


Keep up the good work! ^^
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Itachi!!! Protect your little blonde from your brother!


Also, I see Sasuke is slightly trying to change his tactic with Naruto. Although his logic is not very persuasive.
Keep up the good work. ^^