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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, update soon! :)
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
Is this a ItaNaru, it is isn't it?
Because that would make me so happy because there are to few ItaNaru-fics out there and this fic is really good.
Wouldn't mind if it was SasuNaru as well because I like that pairing too. =)
Aww...Naru-chan is so naive sometimes ;P but that only makes him cute.
Sasuke's a molesting pervert ;P haha...XD
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing!
Take care. Hugs
Is this a ItaNaru, it is isn't it?
Because that would make me so happy because there are to few ItaNaru-fics out there and this fic is really good.
Wouldn't mind if it was SasuNaru as well because I like that pairing too. =)
Aww...Naru-chan is so naive sometimes ;P but that only makes him cute.
Sasuke's a molesting pervert ;P haha...XD
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing!
Take care. Hugs
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
His door opened!!! *gasp* not a cliffie. oh no. though the chapters are quite short and the characters are rather OOC, i still find your story appealing. so please continue updating.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... *goes to the tab to read the next chapter... See it's not up yet.*
O.O.. ;.; Kami-sama, Why do you hate me so?!!!
O.O.. ;.; Kami-sama, Why do you hate me so?!!!
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke seems very OOC in this. I wonder what the hell's wrong with him? Naruto needs to put Sasuke in his place (instead of allowing himself to get raped). Sure, it might make him in trouble, but Sasuke needs to be knocked down a few pegs.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm... just who is this late night visitor?
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You LOVE leaving Clifhangers don't you?
It's so good and yet so bad all at the same time.
It's so good and yet so bad all at the same time.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Itachi must see something he likes. (I know I would have. =^^=)
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad concept, but I'd like to suggest making the chapters a little longer and adding more detail. Maybe flesh out the characters a little more as you go along. I don't know if you have one or not, but you may want to consider getting a beta or two to help you out. This could turn into a better fic if you do that.
In any case I still find it interesting, it just needs a bit more to improve it.
In any case I still find it interesting, it just needs a bit more to improve it.
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for always updating so fast :D
The chapter was great, but i guess you like to tease?!
Hehehe, that qliffie :D
The chapter was great, but i guess you like to tease?!
Hehehe, that qliffie :D