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person KuroiHato
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I feel bad for Sasuke... no one desevers that, I guess. *mummbles* I dunno, it's debtable after what he did to Naru but Naru got over it quickly and Itachi never asked, so I think I'm against what happened to Sasuke... o.0 My head hurts...


Though, love the story.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!!! *gives you brownies and cookies* *dances* More!! More!!!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woo! Gaara X Lee!
person a kitsunes light
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im happy to read another chapter on this story!
And I can't wait to know about the birth of naruto's kid or kids!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was okay, the lemon was good. and i only have one question, C section or *gulp*, nautral birth. and i have a geeling Naruto's going to yell his lungs out at his mate. LOL :) and the bastard who just got released better behave himself. oh and are there any servant pairings in the future? my girlfriend here says she wants to see a Kakashi and Iruka pairing. i said that's up to you.
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I have been waiting for what seemed an eternity! When it's a really good story a few minutes is torture! I really REALLY wanna see Sasuke's reaction to the kids when he finally comes around. And then when Itachi finds out that Naruto kept his rape a secret and that Sasuke was the one who did it... More than spiders for Sasuke! Unless our dear little Naru-chan steps in? Ha ha, Gaara finally told someone that he's been sneaking off to visit Lee! Naruto's reaction to this little tidbit will probably amuse me so I am going to end this prattling and go to the next chappie to see if you wrote it or not! ^_^
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wah! I didn't get to see Naruto's reaction... Ah well, it wasn't that important. ^_^ Woo! GaaLee action! You have the honor of popping my GaaLee lemon cherry(whoa... now I'm thinking about fruit salads...)for I have never read any descriptive scenes with this pair. You were great, hon, let's do this again sometime *laughs like a dork* *clears throat* Anywho... What chapter do you think you'll bring Sasuke back in? Will there be a big difference now that he's gotten a taste of his own medicine? And have we seen the last of Neji-kun?
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, is lee a demon, half-demon, or a human? sorry i forgot to ask that.
person Becky
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh DON"T STOP THERE!!!!!! There has to be at least one really good mushy part with gaara and lee! PLEASE!! Also some more torturing of the father wouldn't hurt either! Anyway GREAT story and looking forward to an update!!!!
schedule September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think Lee should go with Garra to his homeland and end up getting married. and what of Naruto's step dad? hmmm i think he's learned his lesson. and Sasuke ....hmmmmm...let's see. Great chappie passes a fruit basket "hee hee" healthy food this time. OOh..THE BABIES!!! How many!!