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by Girlwithideals

person Tall tree-san
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I ALMOST felt sorry for Sasuke. But after all he did to Naruto, that's called karma right there finally coming around to bite him on the ass!
person zanax
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:'(

You are so evil :'( :'( (joking)

Poor Sasuke!

person Raholea
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
......
so, i was expecting the cruel Itachi, and Naru's mom staying around was nice...
Gaara and lee, well, that's cute that ou're not rushing them. i liked it.
and somehow i wasn't quite expecting sasuke's turn of fate, but i will wat and see what you do with it. *nods*

so coodles for another chappie and good luck for the next one....
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Neji!! Maybe now he'll understand how Naruto felt and how others felt. I wouldn't mind seeing Sasuke disappear from the story at this point, though I have a feeling this is not the last we've seen of him :'( I just hope he doesn't do anything to Neji (Or that by some twist of fate, or whim of the author, they end up together. Just the thought, Ewwww). I can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe Sasuke will get shared around and maybe he'll finally understand what he's been doing all these years and will feel some remorse. Though with his personality he'd probably quicker go to anger at Neji than feeling bad at the things he did himself. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter. Alway nice seeing the asshole suffer and I hope that there'll be an update soon.
person qwerty
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...I didn't like Sasuke but I didn't want him to be rape. Although he did rape Naruto.... *sigh* So conflicted.
Good chapter
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chappie! but the end felt bittersweet!
person a kitsunes light
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Yaaay! The bad guys are finally getting what they deserve!!!!!
I'm really happy we got to see a bit from everything in this chapter!
Also the gaara and lee part was sooo cute! I usually want to know more about naruto but that seen was really good too!
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Set up! (Evil Neji. Then again, Saske would have just raped him anyway, so... yay?)

I'm not sure who to root for. Keep up the good work!
person Raholea
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* you're evil.
and yes, that's a good thing...

i can't wait to see what will happen to sasuke, and i'd love to see what mischief Itachi has in for Naru's dad (stepdad? can't remember).... Next chappie should be fun. *hugs* write more!! please!!

*offers fresh cookies and brownies*
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! I loved this chappie! I hated Naru-chans father if he were real he would be 'Emperor Douchebag Of The Universe' on my Douchebag scale XD. Have lots of fresh brownies!! And cookies!! Lol @ "No, I mean you could be having anywhere between 1 and 6" XD LMAO. *wipes tears away* I hope to read more! Yay!! GO Narus mommy!! Heh.