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for Truth, Love, and Life

by Girlwithideals

person Zigana
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto needs to tell Itachi that he wants to see his mother, then maybe he won't be so mad all the time.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww cute, i hope naruto doesn't stay mad for long lol. dont worry take as long as u need i ♥ ur writing. I kno wat u mean about classes, i just started again too. *dies* god i'm already exhausted. yay will naruto see his mom soon? i bet she'd freak if she knew (good freak) lol ja ne!

_Phantom_ ♥
person Narus_It-chan
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! Woo woo!! More!!! I'm sorry about your computer but I am sure glad you got it fixed!! Yay!! ItaXNaru baby!!! Yay!! Here have some cookies! *gives you a plate full of piping hot fresh out of the oven chocolate chip cookies*
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am sure glad I came on to update my story tonight and I saw that a new chapter of yours was up so I read it, boy am I ever glad that I did! *gives you a giant brownie*
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! You updated!!! For that I shall give you never ending brownies, ice cream and cookies!! *gives said items to you*

Itachi: Oh no...shes happy...Naru-chan we'd better run for our lives unless you want to be thrown into another strange universe.

Naruto: As long as you are there I have no problem going ANYWHERE Ita-chan.
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sasuke's doing actual work for the affections of another? Shocking!

Also, Naruto will probably soon realize he made a mistake when he go Gaara to come protect him from Itachi during his pregnancy. Little does he know the tow will team up and join forces to protect him from himself. Ha!
Keep up the good work! ^^
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow good thing you got your computer fixed. so i'm not worry about it and as for something missing, maybe you should mention some of the servants being excited over Lord's Itachi's and Naruto's first baby a baby shower chapter should help and this time invite Naruto's parents. 1 vote and peanut butter cookies!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Wait, it just hit me, for the next chapter, if Gaara's going into town, he should bump into and meet Lee. sorta of a love at first sight chapter."
person qwerty
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sasuke's a MAJOR douchebag: Sasuke thought for a moment and smiled. “I like nice things.”
What a lame-o!
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work :D

YOSH! hehehe