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by Girlwithideals

person dino1
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Gaara will become an angry towards Itachi and try to persuade him to marry Naruto?
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*huffs and puffs her cheeks out* HEY NOW WHATS WRONG WITH PICKLED PIGS FEET. Those things are so tasty especially when they are pink mmmm *drools* DAMMIT I WANNA BE BACK IN THE U.S. Oh and good story by the way I was waiting to review at the end but one of my favorite childhood snacks was implied! Well I will be looking for an update as usual glad this chapter was longer. You were driving me crazy with the shorter ones.
person Narus_It-chan
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ita!! Why haven't you updated? It cant be over can it? *re-reads* Nope not over...*sighs* Must read yaoi....meh jaaa
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG...poor Naruto is gonna be pregnant for a LOOOOOOOONG time...XD anyway...Um...continue?? Please?? *puppy dog eyes*

Itachi: *grabs Naruto around the waist, hoists him over his shoulder and walks into a room*

Naruto: *sweatdrop* HELP MEEEE!!!!! Ohhh...mmmmmmmmm....*moans*

The sound of a bed squeaking is heard throughout the silent hall way.
person naracest
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter though i'm a little confused. Why is Naruto freaking out like this? the baby is itachi's...isn't it? Gasp! could it possibly from the unfortunate incident with sasuke? I may have to reread. Gaara and naruto never got frisky, did they? Can't wait for more!
Cheers
Meg
p.s. pickled pigs feet? EEEEEWWWWWWWWWW!
person Narus_It-chan
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Baby or babies!! Woot!!!!
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Itachi is the father, right? I do hope that Sasukes rape didn't impregnate Naruto, that would be terrible! I do hop eot read more soon! Oh and ItaXNaru is LOVE!!!
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOO looking good so far XD hehe *is going to read chap 2*
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read. I reviewed. It was awesome. Now PLEASE UPDATE! Please...? With a pile of ItaNaru lemons on top? I promise to deliver! ...If I ever get an account. ~_^
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*EEPS* ITACHI *drools* ^_^....
I hope its ok that im reviewing them all from the begining :/
It'll just look like many reviews off me hmmmmm bleugh just delete if this isnt ok :)