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for Twisted

by Angil

person mike
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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u c what u did?!?!
u got me reading the same chapter again cause u write so damn good.
hey, when u add the next chapter could u plz send a email 2 crushingboy22@gmail.com. tyvm
person mike
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy crap that was good im still laughing
that was ausom, i loved how turn tenshi`s words against her. u better have more 2 write or im going 2B sad.
keep u the good work.
mike (^-^)
person mike
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if u dont write an ending to this, ill be very depressed
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.... ^^ bwhwhahahhahahhaha

Sasuke's become obsessively overprotective of her!! :x This is great. I can't wait for Tenshi to knock him down a few pegs. Keep up the great work!
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think Sasuke is having an a bit of an identity crisis. Suddenly he's not "last" anymore and I think thats a bit of an identity crisis for him. >:) mwhahahahaha.
person Skeeve
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I hope you will continue this effort so we may see where your headed with it. And ignore any nit pickers, their probably jealous of your ingenuity.
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic prologue!!


Can't wait till the first chapter! :D
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for continuing! Boo for haters who suck.

Keep up the good work!
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well this story is interesting i do wonder how things will work out