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by chilepie

schedule May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite stories, I really enjoyed it :)
person Your fellow Narutard
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So...I must say, OMG WOOMAN I NEVER NEW YOU COULD WRITE SOMETHING SO HOT. ^.^ I'm so proud of you *sniffles*
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was F-in HOT
person Onikage
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god, with the noseleed.. *Tries to stop the bloodflow.*

GREAT STORY! YOU ROCK!
person CkA
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
2 hot 4 words~!
person charmpit
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All right! One of my favorite authors in all the world is back with new fiction. You have been missed!

Very hot one-shot, by the way. I love the way you take the two characters and just mold them into what you want them to be. I have never been gifted that way! It's very hard for me to imagine Naruto being that naturally sexually aggressive, but you managed that with ease.

Great job making Naruto lead Sasuke right where he was dying to go!
person Leeana69
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
KAYAHH!!

I love a good NaruSasu. Naru-chan's a total seme when he's writen properly into the role.

*^-^* <- blushyface. X333
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very, very hott.

Naruto-seme all the way!