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January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, one thing all your "guilts" were turned to "quilts ". And yes that was a short chapter but after a bit of writers block its way better than nothing. ~looks doe eyed towards the horizon~ and now I wait for the next chapter.
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(It’s not about just fucking him anymore. I’m starting to like him more than a friend.”)
In one chapter you wrote that Naruto was starting to like Sasuke more than just a friend and then a couple of chapters later you wrote: (He didn’t like Sasuke but who knew)
So does he like Sasuke or doesn't he??? There is not a single character in this story that i like. Just because you're writing sasuke fucked up and angsty doesn't mean you had to write all your other characters with great big character flaws and fucked up.
I prefer fun stories- not stories that continue to assault the characters and thus the reader with angst and physical and emotional trauma. So I'll just stop reading now. Thanks for sharing- i'm sure there's lots of people who enjoy this kind of stuff.
In one chapter you wrote that Naruto was starting to like Sasuke more than just a friend and then a couple of chapters later you wrote: (He didn’t like Sasuke but who knew)
So does he like Sasuke or doesn't he??? There is not a single character in this story that i like. Just because you're writing sasuke fucked up and angsty doesn't mean you had to write all your other characters with great big character flaws and fucked up.
I prefer fun stories- not stories that continue to assault the characters and thus the reader with angst and physical and emotional trauma. So I'll just stop reading now. Thanks for sharing- i'm sure there's lots of people who enjoy this kind of stuff.
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
such an awesome story :) and hope for some more updates but still awesome :p
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June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay!!! An update!!! I absolutely love this fic and was so happy to see this new chappie. The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto is so cute. I hope everything will come to light with Sasuke since I'm curious about what has happened in his past. This is getting too exciting. I feel bad for Neji too...
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!!!
I'm soooo glad that you are back and this is continued!
Well, I felt sorry for Neji
AND NaruSasu fluff and more to come that I cannot wait
THANXXXX
I'm soooo glad that you are back and this is continued!
Well, I felt sorry for Neji
AND NaruSasu fluff and more to come that I cannot wait
THANXXXX
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hiya, I'm at chapter 8 and read through your notes, and thought I might help out a bit. You see, I see a psychiotrist every other week.
they do have lobies and the patients can interact with eachother. It's useually very quiet though. And psychiatrists do NOT push things, if someone says 'I don't want to talk about it' there is the usually 'why don't you want to talk about it?' but it is left alone until the patient choses to bring it up. You were spot on with Sasuke being drained afterwards, sessions can be hard, and can be draining. A good psychiatrist will work very hard to become friends with their patients, not neccesarily outside of the office, but they try to get that kind of relationship to make talking so much easier.
and with the report. Even a court apointed psychiatrist would not give such a detailed repot. Saying Sasuke is doing better is one thing, but adding in personal information such as friends and school life is actually against the law. Doctor patient confidentiality you see.
Even if you don't use this information, I thought you might like to know and am happy to share this with you. And by the way, you write beautifully, I'm addicted to this story to tell the truth ^.^
they do have lobies and the patients can interact with eachother. It's useually very quiet though. And psychiatrists do NOT push things, if someone says 'I don't want to talk about it' there is the usually 'why don't you want to talk about it?' but it is left alone until the patient choses to bring it up. You were spot on with Sasuke being drained afterwards, sessions can be hard, and can be draining. A good psychiatrist will work very hard to become friends with their patients, not neccesarily outside of the office, but they try to get that kind of relationship to make talking so much easier.
and with the report. Even a court apointed psychiatrist would not give such a detailed repot. Saying Sasuke is doing better is one thing, but adding in personal information such as friends and school life is actually against the law. Doctor patient confidentiality you see.
Even if you don't use this information, I thought you might like to know and am happy to share this with you. And by the way, you write beautifully, I'm addicted to this story to tell the truth ^.^
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated! I had been waiting for awhile on this story but I gave up thinking you quit working on it.
Can't wait to see your next update! :D
Can't wait to see your next update! :D
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi there welcome back. I've been keeping an eye on this story from the beginning and I am glad you are back working on it. I was a bit surprised to hear you say you are upset with the nejigaara protion of this story, taking up time and space in the plot. I think it adds depth to the story and it does not distract from the main pair of narusasu. I hope you keep them in the story and help them work out thier relationship. Anyway thanks for the update I just thought I'd let you know that you have a nejigaara fan here, and that I think the story is great as it is developing....so anyway yeah good stuff.
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAYYYY!!!! I'm sooo glad your alive!!! I love this story and, despite your earlier author's notes, had actually thought you had abandoned the story. And now it's back!!! I also have to admit this is my favourite out of all your stories. The Challenge just has a certain spark in it that I think the others lack, not that they're not good, they are, I just like this one best. And now its being updated. HOORAY!!!! Update again soon?? For your loving fans??? For me?? Greyspell xxx ^_^ YAY!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing this story again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.