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by Sylvir

person Lucia
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like the way this story is going!!!!!! ^___________^

Can't wait to know more about the characters! ^w^ You know, like Itachi's reasons for 'some' of his actions, aruto's past 'enounters' xD and Sasuke cutness!!!!!! <---- This last one is a personal favourite ^w^

Hope see you soon!!
JA NE!!
person Davey Lockhart
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good.
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seems like a good story, would like to see how this one turns out. I really liked it so far.
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs ^/_\^
person charmpit
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning.

Get yourself a beta.