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by Sylvir

person Michael
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It makes me sad that you don't really update this that often. I have been keeping up with this story for a long time. :[ Though I do understand when life keeps you busy. Update when you can. I'll be following this story til the very end. :D
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your story!
Please update!
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i wonder why you put this on AFF?
anyway,i love this fic!i love narusasu!
person skyryuu
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read many fanfics and I must say this is one of the few for a high school setting that keep me wanting more. More and more is added to the story and there are twists and turns, some darkness in the story, too, which I always like, which makes things even more interesting. The only things that I find hurt the story though, are spelling errors and incorrect use of the word 'then' for 'than'. the word 'definitely' is also spelled 'defiantly' a number of times in the chapters, which is also wrong. I have time to fix all these if that's fine. For a number of authors, it's kind of rare for only one easily fixable flaw to tarnish their stories. Usually they have more than one problem. This story only has this problem I've seen so far. Please keep writing; I'm hot to see what happens.
person gaara89
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still a great story. I do hope you update soon.



~Reigh~
schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Bout time Itachi came around although not completely. I like he is still a bit worried about Sasuke's well being in the fact that he still doesnt quite know Naruto. He is trying and i love it. Sasuke's one completely changed person and thats exciting too. He is adorable in this fic and not the same ol same ol from other fics. I cant wait for the drama with the bad guys. LOL
person MewMew2
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your welcome. I (and others) understand that it can be difficult coming up with new ideas for continuing stories, and finding the time to update these stories. Thank you.
person Fishcake
schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(~Squeee) i'm so glad u update this
well gaara and neji are an interesting couple and i do enjoy reading about them.
Even you would like to center a few chapters on them, but please at least have a paragraph or two
about naruto and sasuke as well (pretty please, they are so cute and with naruto look deeper to sasuke past
it becomes more and more intriguing)
really can't wait
thanx
person narulov56
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved the story i hope you update soon.
beside some grammar mistakes you did well.
ok..not well....excellent!!!

haha..no serious i hope you update soon...or else i'm gonna sulk to no end...haha just joking!!
person Love_it
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it so adorable
tell you the truth i dread what to come of the next chapter
u know, kinda, calm before the storm thing
can't wait