rate_review Reviews

Oh man...I can't believe I found you so late! i fell in love with this story! Beautifully written with great plot and wonderful characters. You did an amazing job, and I wish this story wouldn't end anytime soon. I really enjoyed your version of Sasuke here and his overprotective brother. It's sweet of Itachi to watch over him, but sometimes it get to be suffocating. Naruto played a great role to become his friend rather than his other great escapades. They fit each other so very well. I'm getting nervous to know what happens next now that we know there will be obstacles coming their way. Thanks so much for continuing this. If you don't mind, I had pimped this story off in my YaoiGallery. Have you ever heard of that site? I would love you to join it. They have a wonderful and supportive community dedicated to our lovely couple here. And you definitely deserve a whole lot of recognition for this fic. Once again, thank you! :D

I'm really loving the story, it's awesome, and yet...please be nice to the mice. I know they are fictional but I just want to point out that mice really should be living in groups of at least two and that cheese is actually bad for mice and causes them problems.

Excellent job! Thank you for commenting on my review and finding the time to post yet another chapter. Please do so again when inspired.

Aiyaaa, so Kabuto is going to find and "take care of" Sasuke for Orochimaru?? Oh noes! Also, yes, that is definitely one of the bigger drawbacks with restraining orders! Another that I've been frustrated with recently (though it's not entirely relevant to this story) is having to prove the restrained person has no rights over the children involved. (specifically, in cases of domestic abuse, having to prove the abusive parent/spouse has no custodial/visitation rights to the children)

Anyway, I love getting to see Sasuke get more and more comfortable with the physical aspects of his relationship with Naruto, though I hope Naruto does get back on track with his schoolwork as well. Can't wait to see the science fair and everything else!

~ lg

In all honesty, I was never that much interested in fics where one or the other is a conquest out of something like a bet or whatever. However, I made an exception with this fic. You know why? It's because you made Sasuke so damn adorable that I wish I could steal him away from Naruto. He's cute, naive, and quite the unknowing seducer when it comes to Naruto. Ah, how I love you portrayed him in this. I really was tired of all the SasuNaru fics out there where he's too dominating and Naruto's made too much of a girl he might as well have boobs.

Your Itachi was quite likeable as well, and what I have imagined him to be in canon, had things worked out differently without all the clan-killing: an overprotective and overbearing older brother always caring for his baby brother and getting him out of the way of nasty perverts out for his chastity (coughNarutocough).

My only comment is on a few typos and other errors, which could be fixed, so don't worry about it. The story is nicely readable and though not really compelling, it still makes me giggle and squeal like a 12-year-old with her first crush. I really like this fic and am quite interested in how you're going to finish this. Best of luck.

Thank you so much for finding the time to update! I know how hard it is to find time to get on the computer for non work related purposes, but I must say you have done an excellent job with updates. Please continue to do so when you find the time.

Awe I am soooo sadened to hear that this story only has a few more chapters to go. There could be so much more to it. It almost seemed to me in this chapter that the interest was lost and you were forced to put out this chapter by guilt. Well anyway the chapter was hot and I thoroughly enjoyed it. If you stop posting your work on here can you email me them or give the link to your LiveJournal?

please update i love this story. your a talented writer. so please update soon thanx you

I'm always happy to see this updated! I don't always have time to review when I'm done reading, but every chapter leaves me eagerly awaiting the next, nonetheless! As for this chapter, yay! Naruto kissed Sasuke and then Sasuke initiated the next..and promised more! *can't wait* Also, I'm glad Ebisu seems appeased for now. The sudden "disappearance" of the Gaara/Neji factor has me a little worried for what Neji may have planned for the future, but I'm glad we're getting a bit of happy reprieve before the major angst starts up. I have to admit, the coming angst has me nervous, but also excited. I'm a sucker for angst, after all, but also for happy endings. >.>

Keep up the good work!

~ lg

Thank you so much for finding the time to update once more. Please do so again when you have the chance.