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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Girl, Interrupted. One of my favourite movies! Just had to say that.
Anyway, I'm interested to see what's going to happen next. Glad to see you updating again. I really feel kind of sorry for Sasuke. He's so clueless and brittle. Poor dear. I kind of want to smack Naruto for being such... a typical guy. But maybe he'll feel something a lot more tangible for Sasuke eventually? I can only hope! Update soon!
Anyway, I'm interested to see what's going to happen next. Glad to see you updating again. I really feel kind of sorry for Sasuke. He's so clueless and brittle. Poor dear. I kind of want to smack Naruto for being such... a typical guy. But maybe he'll feel something a lot more tangible for Sasuke eventually? I can only hope! Update soon!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I seem to start all my reviews with that... Mhhh, I'll have to find something more original...
Oh, sorry, but this is like my tenth review tonight, and I think I started all of them with YAY... Except one which was something along the words of WHAT THE FUUUUCK? But yeah.
Okay, so... HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO US! YOU'RE LIKE TELLING THE STORY IN ADVANCE!!!! Sorry, but I made the mistake of reading the notes at the end where, not only do we find out Hinata is going to try and help Naruto, but that Neji is also after Naruto. You have to stop ruining the suspense and all of that. Seriously.
ANd I agree this chapter didn't have much in it. Oh well, it's always nice to have a new chapter. And it's well written anyway, so pleasant to read...
And we got to see naruto being all sentimental, and Sasuke jerking off, and being very confused at what he wants apparently... He realises that if he hooks Hinata and Sasuke up, it won't just get Itachi off his back, but it'll take Naruto away from him, right?
Okay, well, It's late and I'm tired and this is becoming long, so...
Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you still want to finish this story and update quickly!
XD LANE
Oh, sorry, but this is like my tenth review tonight, and I think I started all of them with YAY... Except one which was something along the words of WHAT THE FUUUUCK? But yeah.
Okay, so... HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO US! YOU'RE LIKE TELLING THE STORY IN ADVANCE!!!! Sorry, but I made the mistake of reading the notes at the end where, not only do we find out Hinata is going to try and help Naruto, but that Neji is also after Naruto. You have to stop ruining the suspense and all of that. Seriously.
ANd I agree this chapter didn't have much in it. Oh well, it's always nice to have a new chapter. And it's well written anyway, so pleasant to read...
And we got to see naruto being all sentimental, and Sasuke jerking off, and being very confused at what he wants apparently... He realises that if he hooks Hinata and Sasuke up, it won't just get Itachi off his back, but it'll take Naruto away from him, right?
Okay, well, It's late and I'm tired and this is becoming long, so...
Can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope you still want to finish this story and update quickly!
XD LANE
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories. I love seeing updates^^ Sasuke making the bento was sweet. I hope he and Naruto can get a kiss soon, I'm as anxious as Naruto is, I think! lol
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job! Thank you for updating in such a timely manner, please do so again when you have the opportunity.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story i love the background info on the siblings its very cute and sweet in that sense. Also i can really relate to Itachi in a sense im the old sister and teachers and guildence counselers always give me weird looks when i attend parent teacher nights.Great story !!!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story! I think the way you're portraying Sasuke, and Itachi's treatment of Sasuke, are really good and well thought out. I love this Sasuke. He is totally cute. The hug he gave Naruto was supersweet! And so was the bento the next day! Kyaa! And for some reason I really like that you have Sasuke masturbating to the memory of hugging Naruto, of his own volitiion. Ah, poor misguided Sasuke.. I can't wait to see how their conversation about Hinata's addition to their tutoring session goes... (and I'm glad to know you're determined to finish this story, because it is awesome and it would suck if it was left unfinished)
Looking forward to the next update!
~ lg
Looking forward to the next update!
~ lg
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:)
GREAT chapter ... ooo hinatas gonna help naruto eyy? >:P
update soon x x x
GREAT chapter ... ooo hinatas gonna help naruto eyy? >:P
update soon x x x
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter!!
i can't wait to see Hinata helping them get together
update soon please
i can't wait to see Hinata helping them get together
update soon please
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
i read this as it came out and was like WOOOOOOOOO and i got really upset when i thought you had abandened it but you havent.
i am exceptionally happy!
i hope you update soon, and continue the story to the same calibre.
thank you for not abandoning the story.
xoxo
i read this as it came out and was like WOOOOOOOOO and i got really upset when i thought you had abandened it but you havent.
i am exceptionally happy!
i hope you update soon, and continue the story to the same calibre.
thank you for not abandoning the story.
xoxo
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October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you got whatever problems you were having sorted out... I always feel bad for being annoyed at people for not updating, and then realising that they had a very good reason for it...
Anyway, I'm glad you updated.
Poor Naruto... He has no more smokes! No, that isn't what I wanted to say, but I couldn't resist XD Loved that line by the way!
Yeah, he seems sad...
Gaara wasn't in this chapter. Well, not really... =( although, now I recall he's pretty scary in this story...
Sasuke got a bit of nerve! I feel sorry for Itachi though. I mean, the fact that he has so many problems to keep Sasuke...
Anyway... I can't wait for your next update! And I'm glad to hear you're not abandonning this fic. Because I hate people abandonning fics as much as you do!
XD LANE
Anyway, I'm glad you updated.
Poor Naruto... He has no more smokes! No, that isn't what I wanted to say, but I couldn't resist XD Loved that line by the way!
Yeah, he seems sad...
Gaara wasn't in this chapter. Well, not really... =( although, now I recall he's pretty scary in this story...
Sasuke got a bit of nerve! I feel sorry for Itachi though. I mean, the fact that he has so many problems to keep Sasuke...
Anyway... I can't wait for your next update! And I'm glad to hear you're not abandonning this fic. Because I hate people abandonning fics as much as you do!
XD LANE