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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
before I read chapter 2, I must make an opinion on it now.
I clearly hate Uchiha Sasuke with a passion, that deep conceded burning hatred that some characters just flat out deserve, and I hate the complete overuse of the yaoi pairing of Sasuke and Naruto... but hot dame did you make this story work for the better! I will make a full review when I finish this story, but god damnit, I want more
I clearly hate Uchiha Sasuke with a passion, that deep conceded burning hatred that some characters just flat out deserve, and I hate the complete overuse of the yaoi pairing of Sasuke and Naruto... but hot dame did you make this story work for the better! I will make a full review when I finish this story, but god damnit, I want more
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...all that hot, mentally molesting story, you dragged us through new york and a plane just so you could make that joke... Props, I didn't think it would end just as epically as it began, nice work. I'm giving it a 10, it deserves no greater honor
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEAL!!!!*
Okay, I'm terrible. I got caught up in a few things, so it's been a while since I checked up on you and your fic, but to find out it's been finally finished-and is AWESOME, btw-just totally makes my night.
That, and thanks so much for the shoutout to Bitch Nights. To have my fic placed in the same sentence as J-Pop Princess' 'Stripped Bare' is probably the highest praise you could have possibly given me. Arigato gozaimasu!
Okay, I'm terrible. I got caught up in a few things, so it's been a while since I checked up on you and your fic, but to find out it's been finally finished-and is AWESOME, btw-just totally makes my night.
That, and thanks so much for the shoutout to Bitch Nights. To have my fic placed in the same sentence as J-Pop Princess' 'Stripped Bare' is probably the highest praise you could have possibly given me. Arigato gozaimasu!
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this sal fellow is awfully lucky. im pretty sure he would rate it a 10/10 ^_^, in fact im sure he would!
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If ever there was a three-some in the making; it's team seven. I'm enjoying the cuteness of this story, and of course the smut!~
And I'll try for the Cookie:
Dim and Zim: Invader Zim (although not my usual genre)
Rude and Reno: Final Fantasy VII
Gene Starwind and Jim Hawking: Outlaw Star
Rukia Renji and Ichigo: BLEACH
Tifa Lockheart: Final Fantasy VII
Ikki and Shun: Saint Sieya ????
Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
Amy
And I'll try for the Cookie:
Dim and Zim: Invader Zim (although not my usual genre)
Rude and Reno: Final Fantasy VII
Gene Starwind and Jim Hawking: Outlaw Star
Rukia Renji and Ichigo: BLEACH
Tifa Lockheart: Final Fantasy VII
Ikki and Shun: Saint Sieya ????
Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
Amy
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Who wouldn't want to wake up like that?
Rox
Rox
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August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FUCKING HOT AMAZING GREAT!!!!!
let me just tell you im a really open minded Bi guy so you can give me anything and ill read it get hot and love your story and you more and more XD, i cant deny that Naruto Toping Sasuke and Sasuke in Sakura is Really hot and amazing, those three together is really something people can't deny as HOT!.... hahahaha
i hope to see more, and remember naruto can do kage bunshin..... (wide smirk) *i can sort of imagine something like Naruto between sasuke and sakura, Sasuke rocking in him Sakura riding him, and a Bushin goes inside sasuke and the other sakura's hole, and if you want to add sasuke kage bunshin you can make some of them to suck each other.... like a naruto sucking his own bunshin, or something like that... A NINJA NARUTO ORGY (Smirks) and as we know when the bunshin dissapear the user get all memories and experiences from that bunshin, well... you can expect something that can match sasuke genjutsu (smirks) sorry but your story got me interested and called my muse, im a sort of writer too :P*
btw: you can make the stories a bit longer specially the sex scenes, but as i said they are great so far the way they are....
let me just tell you im a really open minded Bi guy so you can give me anything and ill read it get hot and love your story and you more and more XD, i cant deny that Naruto Toping Sasuke and Sasuke in Sakura is Really hot and amazing, those three together is really something people can't deny as HOT!.... hahahaha
i hope to see more, and remember naruto can do kage bunshin..... (wide smirk) *i can sort of imagine something like Naruto between sasuke and sakura, Sasuke rocking in him Sakura riding him, and a Bushin goes inside sasuke and the other sakura's hole, and if you want to add sasuke kage bunshin you can make some of them to suck each other.... like a naruto sucking his own bunshin, or something like that... A NINJA NARUTO ORGY (Smirks) and as we know when the bunshin dissapear the user get all memories and experiences from that bunshin, well... you can expect something that can match sasuke genjutsu (smirks) sorry but your story got me interested and called my muse, im a sort of writer too :P*
btw: you can make the stories a bit longer specially the sex scenes, but as i said they are great so far the way they are....
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay i beg you PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! THIS WAS SO HOT AND GREAT!......
btw you need to make naruto TOP sasuke.... in front of sakura :)
btw you need to make naruto TOP sasuke.... in front of sakura :)
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice action. Loved it. Sakura's a very lucky girl.
Rox
Rox
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*trying valanitly to stem massive blood loss from nose* DAMN!!!! you sure know how to turn out some KINKY over the top SMEX!!! you got smokin' hot!!!
*stuffed loads of tissue in said nose* good grief O.o`
anyways great work of art!
laters!~_^
*stuffed loads of tissue in said nose* good grief O.o`
anyways great work of art!
laters!~_^