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schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I've been waiting with baited breath and here you bring me a delicious treat!. If no one else offers, I'd be willing to Beta for you.
person Eremi22
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is sounding great!! I a very excited at the prospect of encountering a miniature Neji with Lee's eyebrows *squeals*
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was good..plz plz continue
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snicker**snicker* You haven't failed to provide another entertaining chapter. I can just SEE all the havoc the boys did in the store. LOL! *holding stomach* It hurts soooo good.
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O

I think I used to work with that guy...

Aw, bless their little innocent minds!

Update soon please!
person navajo
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i cant wait to the alpha's are confronted.
person shadowphoenix143
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that store owner has some balls to ask them to do that! They probably could have just tied him up for being a pervert and taken what they'd wanted anyway! They sure had lots of fun in that store though and got all kinds of goodies! Very funny chapter!
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I haven't laughed so hard in a long time...my face hurts now! Are you on FF.net, cause if you are I want to favorite you and have auto updates!!! I don't want to miss a chapter of this story. You are very talented and have a great sense of humor!!
person Onikage
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG.....!! I Cannot believe how many times I actually laughed during this! The mix of Humor, inuenduos, and future problems.. O.O YIKES!!!

I love the pairings, and really, not that I've read this far, I couldn't see it any other way. I think Gaara and Neji will be the most excepting, (though Neji's clan will throw a fit.) but I can't wait to see what drama unfolds before them, and with Shino, and of course, the Uchihas!

Great story, and i'll be watching! Update soon!
person Raholea
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* i waited until you had more than one chapter and some reviews before reading this and i must say i have enjoyed what you have up. i love the pairings, and i totally like the humour/ angst you're building. and i'd so love to see a shot of the four guys in front of the stand... totally amusing but hot, i'm sure!!
anyways, good luck and write more! thanks for the lurvly story!!!