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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would somebody please give that idiot Uchiha a good kick in the... you can think off a place yourself, be creative. Sasuke grow some damn ... already and tell that brother off yours he is an ass.
Okay that's enough ranting for now.
I love this story, it show very well how creative you are as a writer. It's not just about simple D/s it shows how unpredictable human emotions can be.
I've read a few of your other stories and from what I've read your writing style has improved greatly. You are truly a very talented writer so please keep up the good work. I hope writing gives you as much joy as reading your stories give us, the readers.
Huggles,
Deandraquin
Okay that's enough ranting for now.
I love this story, it show very well how creative you are as a writer. It's not just about simple D/s it shows how unpredictable human emotions can be.
I've read a few of your other stories and from what I've read your writing style has improved greatly. You are truly a very talented writer so please keep up the good work. I hope writing gives you as much joy as reading your stories give us, the readers.
Huggles,
Deandraquin
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww...this chapter made my heart ache.
Poor Naruto, and Itach better have a good reason for saying those hurtful words, or else I will chase him with a pair of slippers in my grasp to hit him with. *growls*
Anyway...I love where this story is going and the great job you've done with it.
It's unusual from most master-slave fics, and that's one of the things I love so much about it.
And I liked that Sasuke's not an asshole for a change, it's good to know that he cares for Naruto enough to face his brother with such a request. I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder what Naruto will do.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
Poor Naruto, and Itach better have a good reason for saying those hurtful words, or else I will chase him with a pair of slippers in my grasp to hit him with. *growls*
Anyway...I love where this story is going and the great job you've done with it.
It's unusual from most master-slave fics, and that's one of the things I love so much about it.
And I liked that Sasuke's not an asshole for a change, it's good to know that he cares for Naruto enough to face his brother with such a request. I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder what Naruto will do.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this story!!!! PLEASE update soon!!! You got me really curius!!! I can't wait to read more!
And I loved how you made sasuke the good friend!!!
I can't wait to see what will happen next!!!!
And I loved how you made sasuke the good friend!!!
I can't wait to see what will happen next!!!!
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great thank you for the update, I am really excited for the next one. Sorry for short review but I have to go soon.
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!! Loved it...very hot.
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like where you are going with the story!!! I like the change once in a while plus I also think Itachi is more sexy and possessive than sasuke so this is one of the few stories that I definitely look forward to reading!!!! Please keep up the good work!!! I love all the hot sex naru and ita have ahhh such heaven!!!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, can't wait for the next chapter
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is hilarious, hot and all of the above. I don't know whether to feel sorry for Naruto or tell him to suck it up, 'you have two hot guys lusting after you'. Oh I did feel sorry that he lost his virginity and such a way... though the blowjob under the table definetly made of for it. I am so looking forward to seeing more and am suprised I just discovered this story now. Well thank you for the good read and looking forward to more later.
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YEY AN UPDATE!!!!!!! awesomeness!!!!
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! This is so hot! And Sasuke and Itachi are deliciously hot and evil and in character. I love it! Never stop writing!