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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot your developing ;-)
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great! pls update soon!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! NO! You ended it! Please write more, lol. ^_^ I am anxiously awaiting.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it wouldn't hurt to include that this story is indeed fiction.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it wouldn't hurt to include that this story is indeed fiction.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'He opened the drawer on his right and took out some lube and a spare tie.'
Ha, my eyes played a trick on me when I was reading and I thought the word tie was the word tire and I was all 'wait, why would Itachi have a spare tire in his desk?'
He's a mean bastard...but that's why we love him right? ^-^
Ha, my eyes played a trick on me when I was reading and I thought the word tie was the word tire and I was all 'wait, why would Itachi have a spare tire in his desk?'
He's a mean bastard...but that's why we love him right? ^-^
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August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's perfeeeect!!!!!!! I sooo wanna see Itachi and Sasuke falling in love with Naruto, but when Naruto realizes that he loves them too he finds out the truth, and he will be soo heartbroken that he runsaway with his aunt, and Itachi and Sasuke will do anything to have their litlle blond doll back!!!! AAAAAh, can't wait for more chappies, please keep up the good work.
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!
YA NE!!!
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!
YA NE!!!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the only thing that was disappointing was that there was no sasuke yet! lol now, your sex scenes seem a bit rushed i think...? great fic though! i love kisame calling him barbie xD
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am certainly not disappointed but I wonder will there be a threesome. Will Naruto be able to walk or will he need to be in a wheelchair. Will he be able to hangle two at once if you choose to put him through it? I wonder... I hope you update soon.
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drooled to death*
Ahh, I totally love the slightly evil Itachi. And the ItaNaru-ness is killing me! =)
By the way, please don't tell me that it will be some ItaSasu aswell. I don't like that pairing.
Anyway, keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
Ahh, I totally love the slightly evil Itachi. And the ItaNaru-ness is killing me! =)
By the way, please don't tell me that it will be some ItaSasu aswell. I don't like that pairing.
Anyway, keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I loved it. Please continue.