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by Kurokit

person tiger alchemist
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please make this more than a oneshot. It kind of already suggested that more was so come so please update!
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was interesting, you sooo totaly need to contineu, cause in ur story u said that Itachi will let Sasuke also have fun
with Naruto. They have fun with Naruto for a while and then naruto finds out what they really did, and make Itachi and Sasuke
live trough hell. or something like that, I mean come on, I so wanna see naruto kick their asses for doing this to him, he was
a freaking virgin for pete sake!!Let them suffer...bwabwabwa

keep up the good work
YA NE!!
person Drumanel
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i would like to read more, please
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
um... hell YEA i want more! i heart IT/NA
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa totally hot. I hope this is a mutli chapter story.
=)
person KitsuneSK
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love for this to bloom into a full fledged story! Please continue it!
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would definitely be interested in reading more. C'mon ya' can't leave us hangin' while you've got us twisted around your finger with such a good story.
person tash1021
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes yes yes pleeease update this story is hot
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should continue it because:

1.) More UkeNaru goodness on the internet= a better world for yaoi fans everywhere!
2.) Sasuke didn't get a turn! Poor Sasuke!
person bloodycrisis
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue another chapter. I like how the story is going so far.