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for Trapped

by Kurokit

person Leeana69
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Itachi's so evil...poor Naru-chan. :'O

But at the same time...>:D

X333
person masako
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE!!! hehehe...hope you decide to add some more chapters
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah... I would like to read more
person Onikage
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you have the ideas, it's a shame to waste them. I'm a sucker for a Multi-chapter.
person Anon
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love it if you made it a multi chapter story!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh you definately have to add more chapters to this lol, what a great idea i totally can't wait to read where u take this, i hope u also include at least once instance where he shares naruto with sasuke, a threesome would be awesome, theres been a lacking of sex slave fics lately, so i really hope you decide to continue this :P
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i would love another chapter!
i have a few ideas if you want them....
ok i think Naruto should some how find out he is fraimed by itachi.
like he hired a private investigator with out itachi knowing.
that would be pretty cool. anywho thats my two cents.
person kanaro
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry worry, it's fine if you only have one chapter....NOT!!

Are you serious? As if anyone would say no to more delicious Ita/Naru smut! Bring on the kinkiness!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I want to read more of this!
person AerieTigre
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I rather liked the way this was going. If this was an itch of yours for BDSM fics, please don't stop scratching it~