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finshed the frist chappie on two the second. i like it. its really good.

oh, by the way thanks for the review... ^^

YOU!!! *points at author* how dare u!!!!! *sobs* y u make go n half to cry like the bitch i am :cries* yyyy!? n e way love love the story honestly one of the best ... yep that u are!!!! now they can get married ... u said they travel right well... write a smutty sequel to this story and have them travel to canada where its legal ... woot woot canada lol XD

WOW, they got hitched, well sort of.
And Tachi is going to be a papa, sweet!!! Finally your muse is nice for Tachi.

This story is great. I really enjoyed every part of it.
I hope my story will turn out as well as yours did.

A job well done!!!!!!!!!

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Thanx for the compliment.

OMG!! I went through at least two boxes of tissues. Your muse is very harsh on Itachi, well at least he got to say goodbye.

But yay, Naruto and Sasuke are going to live together. I hope Naruto learns to handle the weather there lol.

Great chapter as always. I can't wait for the next one.

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I just read this from chapter 1 to 15 all in one night, and I gave up hours of sleep to do it, but it was totally worth it.

At first, I was feeling it a bit, the idea was cute, but I didn't see where it could go.
And then you introduced Sasuke's fucked up family, and wow did you work that idea.

I cried at the end of chapter 12 and through 15.
(Noooo~ Itachi! Please be okay! [That was me yelling in my head while I was reading it xD])
Oh god, I'm so stuffy from crying, but I love it when fics move me enough emotionally to actually cry.

I can't explain to you how much I enjoyed reading your fic, because I'm so tired but know that now I'm a HUGE fan of yours now.

The L. W. Y. B. thing really got me too, man, it makes me want to get a tattoo of that on my fingers xD
I think that's one of the cutest things I've ever read.

Argghhh, I'd soo spew out words of admiration and undying love for you and your fic, but like I said, I'm tired as hell D=

Please update soon, even though I can see how much of a bitch is would be to write this, know that, not only me but others too, really appreciate it and enjoy it immensely~

Thanks, and sending you love&hugs through the 'net,
Space.

[PS: I want to draw fanart for your fic, especially of Any Time the Fly, could you possibly send me pictures (via email) of the kind of clothes each member would wear? Also, does any of them wear their hair different than the anime version? Like Hinata, is her hair short or long like the current version? And yeah, please don't say "I'll leave it up to you" I'm so nitpicky about how the writer views the characters in their heads, so just please do me the favor? I love you enough, but itd help me lots and give me more confidence to draw~ Thanks again! *hugscuddle*]

OMG!!! I really had tears in my eyes. I was relieved when Sasuke got out save, but it broke my heart to read Itachi being mortally wounded.

Indeed your muse is mean to Itachi, but it works out fine in the story. I only hope she won't kill him off in the end.

I really felt touched by the last sentence of the chapter;
It was a night of sorrow and joy, and the two warring emotions were just too much to handle without loved ones by your side.

Another great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.

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I love this story. It has everything I look for in it.
Keep up the great writing. Your muse does a great job too in inspiring you.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

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I sort of wish you didn't go there with Itachi's background. Not for the obvious reason though (though the obvious reason does factor into it), so much as, well... First we find out Naruto was raped and molested, then possibly Sasuke will be (well, molestation seems to have already happened), but now Itachi too? Just too many IMO :(. It kind of makes me think the respective gangs just... can't seem to get laid legit wise XD;. I was actually hoping his bad background would be something like having to kill a family in cold blood (considering in the manga he doesn't like to kill when he feels it's senseless) or something, and I'd have probably felt just as sorry if he was horribly effected by it. But then, that's just me, so... you can go ahead and ignore it.

Buueh, oh well. Keep writing though :). Aside from that I do like the tension and story.

Are you implying that Itachi's father did to him, what Madara threatened to do to Sasuke? Egads!! What kind of family is this? I would imagine it would be more of an assertion of power, and a way to break his spirit, than a lust. And I agree with Jess249, your muse is kinda scary. But it makes for a good nail biting story. I am going to go back and re-read it. ^.^ I look forward to new chapters as always. xxoo

ps. And so you know, because of you, I am now hopelessly addicted to yaoi, and I seek out other stories in the genre as well, to feed my addiction. ^.^

Wow. This chapter made me cry. Especially the song. I don't have personal experience with a piercing actually ripping out, but I have had them tugged on pretty firmly when fresh. (Nip peircing caught in lacey bra.) Man, that scene in The Punisher always makes me cry when that dude has all his piercings ripped out with a pair of pliers because he won't rat on his friend.