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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Confussed... Gaara is the redhead with the love tat on his head, who's temari's youngest brother. You had him in chapter 2 and then in this one you said Sasuke had never seen him before. Its good so far, I just thought I'd point that out.
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Sasuke is enforcing the boundaries--good for him!
Pein is throwing down the gauntlet as well...this should be interesting.
Best chapter yet.
Pein is throwing down the gauntlet as well...this should be interesting.
Best chapter yet.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning.
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. How often does someone's favorite band end up camping out at their home? Great story.