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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story very much. It has so much depth to it, it's nearly made me cry twice. I can't wait to see if you update it again, but whether you do or not, it's a wonderful story!
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this idea for the story. Amazing job- I hope you guys continue!
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH! Another great read.
Love the makeup bit in chap 3.
This story is more melancholic than the Dance with the Devil one, but I still like it very much - a very entertaining and enticing read.
Awesome stuff, guys!
Love the makeup bit in chap 3.
This story is more melancholic than the Dance with the Devil one, but I still like it very much - a very entertaining and enticing read.
Awesome stuff, guys!
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July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next. I look forward to the next chapter
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update. That was good. Very satisfying and yet heart pulling. I can't wait to keep reading where this story is going. Please update again soon.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you get the angst part of the characters very well and I am not saying that's bad because so far your characterization is very good. Anyhow, I totally think the plot is very, very interesting and promising. While I was reading the story I was thinking since Itachi and Sasuke is awkward towards each other, injecting a little humour would not be bad. It could spice things up a little and lighten things up a little. That’s not to say I don’t like the approach you took regarding or criticizing it. I like it and I am looking forward to reading the next chapters. Sorry, if I sound confusing! Till next time.
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great start, I look forward to reading more
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this story is developing. I like the inner struggles both brothers are conflicted with and how everything is moving. I hope you can update this story soon.