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for He'd Been Stopped

by nahtsea

person a kitsunes light
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter as well! I'm happy I got to know more of naruto's past!
And I really like the fact that sasuke proved his love by staying by naruto's side! I can't wait to find out what he will do to help naruto through his problem!
I will be looking forward for your next chapter!
Also I didn't want to forget to thank you for updating so fast! Not many do it! So: Thanks!
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, thats scary! Orochimaru is a creepy son of a bitch. Somebody needs to contact the authorities right quick!! There can't be any sort of stature of limitations on rape, can there? (Although if he is supposed to be some sort of powerful influential figure in this, all those political connections are always a problem.)

Overall, excellent chapter. The Sannin is back to his manipulations and Sasuke gets to be the protector! (A nice twist on the cannon, btw.) Keep up the great work!
person qwerty
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dum dum dum! You have me on the edge! This looks really good!
update!
person qwerty
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dum dum dum! You have me on the edge! This looks really good!
update!
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! o_o'
Was Naruto raped by Orochimaru as a child?? =_= I can almost understand the suicide attempt as a response to the kind of desperation and fear one would experience at the thought of going back to that.
Keep up the great work. The story's only two chapters in and its interesting as hell. ^^
person a kitsunes light
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really really like this story!!! I hope you get to update it soon! Also because you left with lots of questions (even though I do have some ideas of what the answers might be....) and I wanna know what will happen next!!!! Also I have a little doubt: who is uke and who is seme, or are they both both things and change each time?
person Onikage
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Killing intent on edge.* MUST.. KILL.. SNAKE... BASTARD...!!! *Youthful flames of the eyes.*

^.^ GREAT STORY!! UPDATE SOON!
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, that was lovely. Please continue? I will be waiting (not patiently).
person Death Warranty
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be another chapter? Because I really want there to be another.