rate_review Reviews

ok apparently this site isnt letting me stay logged in so i used my username anyway i just wanted to say that i absolutely love this story. ive read it many times and it gets to me everytime.

This was so sad i actually started crying. I never cry! It was like a romeo and juliet story only ninja style

It's beautiful. And, I'm crying.

Dang that just gut me! I hate to be selfish and all, but I'm glad they went together because well I'm selfish and I don't think either one would handle being left behind without the other.

Sigh ... was directed here from your fanfiction.net page - the Sasuke trying to get Naruto's location from Sakura story... Dang! I'm a sap and the imagery here just leant that extra element - the setting sun, fading orange, - setting Naruto, orange covered in white etc... fading ... sniff!

Okay...Im going to try and put this in a less dramatic way... But I can't! OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS! IT WAS A GREAT STORY...A WONDERFUL STORY BUT...IT WAS SO SAD...I NEARLY CRIED. IT ENDED PERFECTLY AND IT WAS SO PASSIONATE...I FELT SO BAD FOR NARUTO,BUT THEN SASUKE...I can't even finsh this becasue i'm about to cry.

Oh, god. That was amazing.
I'm crying right now, in a sort of stunned awe... wow

I know I posted a review on FF.Net, but I just read this story again and once again, I touched by this story. You have to be tired of hearing this, but this story is so beautiful. It was wonderfully written, the emotion that pours out each line catches the reader up in this terrible moment and we are breathing with them until the last breath has been drawn. I love this story, unbashedly and whole-heartedly. I rank this as among one of my favorite scenes only second the reunion of Gentle and Pie in Clive Barker's Imajica. Fanfiction or not, as reader and lover of will written tale, I happily give this little one-shot story my praise.

Sorry for crazy groupie ranting, but I could not--I don't know, I just know that I each time I read this story, I am humbled by your amazing talent and left in awe of such a good story.

Sean

This was beautiful, very well written, and even though the subject is sad, I'm glad you've written such a good fic. Thank you.

Nice work, I found that really sweet.

I absolutely abhor death fics, I never understood why someone would kill off one of their favorite characters. For that reason I avoid death fics like the plague. With that said I found this to be beautiful and really well written. I loved the whole Sasuke and Naruto interaction, and found the Sakura conversation with the answer machine in the background to be brilliant. As said before this was really well done and something even people like me who aren't into death fics could enjoy.