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by Elli

person tash1021
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes its very personal and sweet
i love it
person Anon
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a very beautiful story and it touched me like you wouldn't believe. The writing style was simple but worked beautifully. I want to read it over and over again. The emotions were so strong, you could literally feel the connection and love between the two. Just... wonderful. I loved it.
person MeLaiya
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely heart breaking, very well written though. Keep up the good work and update soon.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a big Naruto fan, but I read this because a friend recc'd it.

It's absolutely beautiful. It took my breath away from the very depth of feeling and poignancy of it all. Thank you so much for sharing this lovely piece of work.