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for Be Mine

by KohakuShadow

person SamuraiSaaya
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM

This one-shot was actually far more exciting than others. The reason being, it was far more real and raw than other stories where everything is done perfectly, even for the fist time. Gaara and Naruto's reactions were amazingly hott and the ending was definitely cute.

I look foreward to more stories!
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ahhh....how cute!!! I loved it KAWAII
person dobeisme
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww!

I loved it, but you should add another chapter where they spend Valentine's Day together, and describe everyone's reactions. I wanted to be humored by their reactions! :O

But I still loved it. That was really sweet.
person llyoung
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story (as always your stories are fantastic). It was so funny and also very sweet. I really love the way your write Gaara.
person charmpit
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GaaNaru forever!
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm off to brush my teeth. That was sooooo sweet. Thank you. Sometimes a girl needs the fluffy loving cuddle her heart in during the cold winter.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww! that last line was so cute
person MeLaiya
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw that was too cute...and hot. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!


Too much love and props are needed for this fic. I'm only one person! =^^=

Ok. Now I can't wait for your Cinco de Mayo story come Fall. >:) hehehe
Keep up the good work!