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for Life Before Life After

by anlaaria

person Dragon77
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.
person Nanin
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright.
Straight out.
You have me, hook, line, and sinker.

I'm inter- no that's not the correct wording, more like ecstatic about this story.
The last chapter, I was in tears through out.

Such emotions displayed, I'm surprised I stopped crying after a while.

I'm begging you, please update.
Emotions/curiosity is killing me.
person Gina
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say, that I love your fiction! One of the most well written plots and story i have seen out there!
the characters are developing just perfect and the story is really interesting.
And I happen to love the drama to!:)
And Naruto - so mature and clam. I kind of like this kind of Naruto.
And Sasuke, well it's nice to see a Story for his POV.

You got yourself a fan!

Keep it going, your story is really going in the right way!
Going to be looking out for the next chapter!

Rock on!!
//Gina
person anon
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay, seriously. You NEED NEED NEED NEED NEED to do the next chapter. Please? for your fans? pretty please?
person IvvyMoon
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this is so wonderful! I love this fic! I first read Baby, Baby, Baby and am now checking out your other fics. Awesome. I love the angst and all the emotion behind this. I hope you will update soon. I really can't wait to see more of Sasuke's and Naruto's interaction.
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I was skeptical for the first chapter, but I'll be looking out for it now.
Good job though. I like Sasuke's personnality, and some of your OC's are pretty cool.
Well, looking forwards to the next chapter!

XD LANE
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahahahahahahahaha... I love the cupcakes. Fantastic. >:D


This story just keeps getting better and better. Personally my favorite parts, aside from the cupcake thing, were the scenes where Naruto almost gets raped and sequentially, Sasuke's apology. I also loved Sasuke's confession at the end there where admitted to calling Naruto a monster. Sakura is completely right. Sasuke needs to say something to Naruto or Naruto will always have that belief in the back of his mind.


Keep up the great work.
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More soon please...
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why does no one review anymore? Fantastic chapter as usual, Aw, poor Sasuke having to stomp his dignity into the ground….repeatedly. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“That bastard wouldn’t know rough sex if it hit him with a whip.”


Ahahahaahaaaa!!!!
Oh God! So many good lines in this last chapter! Very creative and touching and intense! Can't wait for more, like everyone else, I'm sure. I love officer Ken XD That bit about Anko's attire! Hilarious!