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for Life Before Life After

by anlaaria

person dragonlady sakura
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I just fell in love with this story. Not only is filled with good writing, it also has a nice balance of humor and drama. Definitely will be back for more chapters.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad you updated this. I'm curious as to why blood instead of tears. Will you explain that later?
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure about reading this, since at first I took the summary as just another "Sasuke's back and ready to redeem himself to Naruto" stories.. but after taking the time to read it, I'm really glad I did. This is really a one of a kind story with a fantastic plot. Naruto is much more subdued and mature in this and I think those changes speak volumes about his personality. You can still see hints of his happy, mischievous, boastful and crafty personality in this, but its highly played down, like he's finally accepted himself and stopped acting. Yes, there's pain and yes, he's still coming to terms with Sasuke's return and new relationship, but its all very real and I appreciate that. Sasuke too is excellently crafted. The way he views himself and comes to term with his life, what he did, and his future is interesting. The need to punish oneself in little ways is one of the most believeable faults in his personality that I see few other authors capitalize on or explore. Its like you paint your stories with a subtle stroke and the image you convey is authentic.

I truly am impressed and now eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Keep up the great work.
person Halskr
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update on this. It was nice to see them working together. How long will Sasuke have to be on restrictions, or some more information about them would be nice.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I’ve been on the edge of my seat waiting for an update since the first chapter, and I love how well paced it is. Everyone seems so in-character.

I’m still waiting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter to come out because this is honestly one the most worthwhile fanfics with this pairing that I’ve read in a very long time.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the plot development, and the fact that Naruto isn't just accepting Sasuke back legs-wide-open.

I'm looking forward to more.
schedule August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I really like the story. I want to know what is next. Thanks for the hard work.
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There's something eerily beautiful about the image of Sasuke crying tears of blood. Seems so fitting for him. Or maybe I'm just a little crazy;) I did get seriously turned on by a blood-spattered Johnny Depp in Sweeney Todd...but I digress. I'm really enjoying this story, it's incredibly well-written and it's obvious you're taking the time to think it out and know exactly where you're heading with each chapter. The characterizations are wonderful. I hope you update soon, but no rush! I love that you take your time and get great, quality chapters out for us!
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Where have you been all my life! XD You are such a great writer! I especially liked the very last scene where Sasuke is being sedated not quite successfully. Your writing is eloquent and spicy, I love the characterizations and the conversations they all have. Can't wait to see where this goes; hopefully it won't be too angsty, but then again, you just can't seem to have Sasuke without a liberal helping of just that!
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hunh. interesting