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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As much as I want to say, get them to fucking, I, as an author, understand. I was so sad to see Naruto having Sasuke help him leave the village. I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next one.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! It's in this chapter that Naruto gets the whiskers marks and the spiral thing tattoo for a seal that he has in the anime! I can so imagine the 9 symbols surrounding the spiral! Awesome! Keep it up!
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just love Itachi more than anything. Makes me happy he swooped in at the end. Now this turn of events makes me wonder what will happen next. Naruto incinerating the building with such a burst of power was mind blowing. I'm really looking forward to what all is revealed about Naruto now that he is fully 'awakened'.
~Day
~Day
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-snickering- it would have been hilarious had lee been one of the guardians. can u imagine him trying to get naruto into that green spandex infront of itachi? disturbing and erotic at the same time right? lmao!!!!
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To keep the author sane...I must really say that this story is one of my favorites. It is well developed and enjoyable...and I really like how Naruto is in this story, he is smart but still a prankester. And Itachi is very cool even if he a little possessive but that is what we like about him.
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome!I love that it's a mix of action scenes with the emotional aspects! I just ran across this and I am hooked! Please update soon!
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this!
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I so knew Kimimaro was earth! I thought Temari was wind though. Update soon! actually now! now! now! XD
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa! more! gimme gimme more!
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey! another fast update! I like this chapter!
so, uhhhh.......... when are u gonna giv us some
lemons?!?!?!?!?! oh well, i like the way it's going
so write more soon!!!
I pick Neji for the sun! I love Neji so put him in okay?
Oh! and I pick Tayuya for sound!
so, uhhhh.......... when are u gonna giv us some
lemons?!?!?!?!?! oh well, i like the way it's going
so write more soon!!!
I pick Neji for the sun! I love Neji so put him in okay?
Oh! and I pick Tayuya for sound!