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for Transcending My Wings

by mcpnoi360

schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Meow!



(I don't know. Its late. I just worked a 16 hr shift. My brain's too shot to think of a good review... so you get cat noises. >:P)
Keep up the good work.
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please make the pairing ItaNaru! That be so cute and drool-worthy. XD
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All three guardians are probably going: "WTF? He's gone, maybe dead? What about the prophecy??? I still have this tattoo thingy on my hand... how am I still supposed to be a guardian if I got nothing to guard???"

I think Naruto's going to go back to the museum and go through those Kyuubi doors he saw glowing red there. Although I could be wrong.
Keep up the good work.
person BBW
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww tear! dat was nice
person KnightSlayer987
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon
the story is so getting good right now
i wanna know who the rest of
the guardians are.

Keep up the good work!
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DON'T LEAVE US HANGING! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT THEY SAW,SO HURRY UP WITH CHAPTER FOUR!
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You! You and your cliff hangers!!!


Damn you....
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think this chapter was lacking at all, in fact I liked it. Its rare to find an adventure story of this nature that's yaoi, usually the stories of this kind on ff.net are het so it's definitely a welcome change. SasuNaru or ItaNaru I could care less as I like them both, I just like the idea for the story in general. It's kind of like Fushigi Yūgi with a Naruto twist. Anyway looking forward to the next chapter.
person Lanie12777
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is REALLY good, I'm dying to read more! Update soon please!!^_^
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wha-- Naruto has a force field!!! Kick ass! lol

Keep up the good work. Interesting story.