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January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this! When might the next chapter be done?
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October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is brilliant!
It actually has a plot! :D
Even by the standards of other writing (not just fanfiction) it's quite good.
The characters are interesting and fairly consistent. The relationships are believable, if a little fairytale-esque.
The conflict is gripping and fits well within the naruto-verse.
Overall it seems very well thought out and brilliantly executed.
Good job.
Please continue.
Please.
It actually has a plot! :D
Even by the standards of other writing (not just fanfiction) it's quite good.
The characters are interesting and fairly consistent. The relationships are believable, if a little fairytale-esque.
The conflict is gripping and fits well within the naruto-verse.
Overall it seems very well thought out and brilliantly executed.
Good job.
Please continue.
Please.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story... I'm enjoying the complexity of the plot and the fact that the characterization is taking a priority rather than their "playtime" with one another. It's refreshing and makes getting to the fun stuff all the more pleasurable.
That being said, I notice the story hasn't been updated in quite awhile. This is saddening, because it is such a great story. I'd very much like to read more.
That being said, I notice the story hasn't been updated in quite awhile. This is saddening, because it is such a great story. I'd very much like to read more.
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy geez. You're seriously one of the best writers I've seen here in this Naruto/Gaara pairing section. You don't just suddenly throw them together in bed, you don't have either of them wondering who will jump who, wondering if they're gay or not; there's drama, suspense, hilarity...
Plz to be finishing this soon!
Plz to be finishing this soon!
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i am loving this story! the whole sasuke interlude was just magical, and even though itachi barely does anything he still manages to be adorable. please write more and soon!
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you write more Sauske/Sai chapters.
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh God this is a beautiful story. I love the comic moments, the soft ones, the regretful ones, but the painful moments, like Naruto's sad desolate smile that Gaara hates so much takes my breath away and brings tears to my eyes.
Bravo for such a wonderful piece of writing. I will wait with baited breath for the next chapter!
Bravo for such a wonderful piece of writing. I will wait with baited breath for the next chapter!
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When's the me t chapter. Coming out?! (soon I hope!) plase hurry!
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January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story... when can we expect more? I'd REALLY like to read what happens next!! I think my favorite was what happened with poor, bastardly Shika~ Either way, I'm off to read your other gaaranaru fics, but I do want continuation as soon as possible! Happy new year!
Panur
Panur
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Good work. Can't wait for more.