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by CanadianGinger

person Axel
schedule February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHHHHHHH WHERS PT 2
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I will wait impatiently for the next chapter. Please continue this story ^^
person raven ne ermore
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Karen
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update faster and I'll write more reviews. Im humouring you with this one.
person Viri L
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE YOUR STORY AND I COPIED YOUR EMAIL IF THATS FINE WITH YOU!! LOL...WELL PLEASE KEEP UPDATING THIS STORY IS AWESOME AND IM NOT A MEMBER THATS WHY I COPIED YOUR EMAIL! WELL, CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THOSE TWO! JA NE
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:] Geez, I love this story. Ohh, and if you wouldn't mid, I would love to be on the mailing list. XD

BoyMagnetElaina@aim.com

Oh how I hate my email. D:

But anyway, the last chapter, I think it was the best so far. Keep up the good work!!

-Elaina.
person Moonmoore
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to be part of the mailing list, marqqui @ yahoo . com
Thanks! I am just dying to see the cofrontation between Naruto and Sasuke! What I dont get is why was Sasuke so upset that Naruto left when he (Sasuke) broke up with him. Care to explain?

Sincerely

Moonmoore
person Sa-Chan
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter! I'm still loving this story and I can't wait to find out what happened with Itachi. I have to think a bit about the pairings though, it's difficult knowing who would suit who...

Thank you so much for this chapter! I have left my e-mail here and I would love to get a mail when this story is updated.
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you handled the flashback. (Welcome back, btw. I appreciate the lack of insincere apology for the late update. This isn't your job. You don't have to adhere to some sort of ridged update schedule. You update when you want. :P)

As for pairings... meh. I don't care. Surprise me. Just don't pair Iruka up with Kakashi. Its a tired pairing and I'd prefer to see something different. How about Iruka with that girl from the ramen shop (I forget her name) and Kakashi with whomever else. Actually, I don't see Kakashi being tied down with everyone. Just make him a frequenter of the red light district and his justification for going there is that whenever anyone he knows' relationships are on the rocks and there's drama abound, have him throw up his hands in the air and say "See, this is why I don't do relationships." Heh. Thats actually pretty funny. Do that. (Just another thing that sets him apart from Gai. ^^)


Anyway, keep up the great work.
person TrickyPuck
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG, i love this story... *nosebleed* I NEED MORE!!! PLEASE!!!