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by CanadianGinger

person Mija
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow I barely found this fic tonight and I am delighted I did, I only have one complaint, small chappies but I know how that goes, ok now I am a bit confussed, was it not Sasuke who kicked Naru in the face and booted him out of his house? Yet Sasuke blames Naruto for confessing his love to him, thus causing him to come back from Orochimaru??? So did sasuke defect before or after his tiff with Naru that caused Naruto to leave for Suna? And why and the name of all that is good should Naruto even CONSIDER forgiving Sasuke, unless it was some cruel joke played on them both by some outher person or persons like Itachi or Orochimar, cause really I cant see Sasu being that much of a Bastard to Naruto to say all thos words and then kick him with his steel toed boot, or am I getting things confussed here? I tend to do that alot, and if he kicked Naru out, then why did he go into a rampage the next day when he found Naruto gone and tore up half his estate, and when did he get to the estate?? I thought Sasuke has said that he had bought the place he had been sharing with Naru?? Again I am a tad confussed but I am sure you will make it all smooth and explain this through the story, which I have yet to tell you I enjoyed immensly, I am just sorry there is not more to read, I hope you update soon, ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Mija
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh and on a side not that I forgot to add, I am a HUGE SASUNARU NARUSASU fan and I am all for them being together, cant see them with anyone else, but there will have to be much splaing going on before I think Sasuke deserved to even speak to Naruto after what he did to my sunny blond headed boy, ok enough bugging, ty for listening, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person animelover
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
geez, i look away for a minute and see TWO updates since my last visit. DANG!!! LOL! anyway, having kakashi be the sharingan instead of sasuke was a knee jerk thing, but the 1000 years of pain was absolutely hilarious! i could just picture it.

keep up the good work!
person Lea
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You got me good. That never crossed my mind. It was just so natural to think "Sasuke" when I read the word Sharingan.


person Hakitsu
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woow, this story is awesome!! I can't wait for the next chapters!
person Nibiki
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What do I think? Hmm..... ::grins:: Definitely More! ( ^,^)/
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was Kakashi?! Sad trick u pulled! Update soon!
person Ivy
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fic ^_^ Can't wait to see who the ninja was from the last chapter! I hope Sasuke has a good reason for all the harsh stuff he said and to actually go into a rage over Naruto leaving...the nerve lol Update soon!
person Lea
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got some explaining to do Lucy, I mean Naruto. I disagree w/ Sasuke. Naruto doesn't have to explain himself at all. He should just kick his ass & snog Neji silly. Not that I don't want them to end up together. I just want Sasuke to suffer.
I can't wait to read more of this. Thanks for the update.
person Sa-Chan
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I log on and see two new chapters, what a treat! This story just gets better and better. I love the way you write Kakashi oh I laughed loudly when I read a 1000 years of pain, so funny...

I'm really looking forward to reading more and thank you so much for these chapters!