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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not to be rude but the story idea is good but that chapters are too short and it suxs you have a page for author notes
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Becuase of you I activated my old account and now I have people yelling at me about unfinished stories.
Anyway. I'm vastly enjoying your story and am awaiting more updates and to see how you handle each of Naruto's 'run ins'.
Anyway. I'm vastly enjoying your story and am awaiting more updates and to see how you handle each of Naruto's 'run ins'.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahahahahaha! I didn't see this coming at all! You are the best. =^^=
Keep up the great work! :D
Keep up the great work! :D
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it is pretty good and I would like to read more. Please up date soon this story is a great idea.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like that it was Kakashi! It just makes me more excited to see what will happen when Sasuke confronts him...very good chapter!
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story. It is very good. Please continue quickly.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I have so many questions but I know that they'll be answered in the future.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Naruto and Gaara seem slightly more demonic. Could it be they've been merging with their tenants? (The smoke and fire transportation jitsus seem like something of a hint. heh.) Naruto had red eyes through the whole thing up until this last chapter. I was starting to think they no longer turned back.
Anyway, great story. Keep up the good work! ^^
Anyway, great story. Keep up the good work! ^^
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good! I love the way you portray Naruto and it seems he has gotten stronger in the four years that he has been gone fron Konoha.
I would like to read more about Sasuke and way he is so angry, something must have happened. I also can't wait to read about his reactions when he finds out Naruto is back.
Thank you so much for this story and I hope that you update it soon! :)
I would like to read more about Sasuke and way he is so angry, something must have happened. I also can't wait to read about his reactions when he finds out Naruto is back.
Thank you so much for this story and I hope that you update it soon! :)
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! Please continue.