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for Monster

by CanadianGinger

schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued and I wish for more...
person shadow
schedule March 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE XP ..... im not kidding i am dieing here .... i keep checking up on this one and i get nothing it makes me sad T_T
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more more more more MORE ok i asked for it now please plaese PEZZZZZZZZZZZZZ write more i have been checking up on this story every week for 8 months and always hope to see more so this time i though that i would tell you to put up more and it better be a long chapter T_T i looooooves this concept and really wants to read more on it i mean even my chericter shadow loves it " why are you talking for me " cuz i can " gahhhhh shes driveing me crazy " and hes getting on my nervs ..... go get laied " W....WHAT ? WHY YOU THATS ..... WHY WOULD I ....... GAHHHHHH" hahahaha so before you think im crazy back to my review ummmmmm ya so pleas put up more thank you loves this concept and the storry so far is asom ^_^
person DemonicKitsune-chan
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am reviewing, I EXPECT results :D
Your story is awesome I can't wait until Naruto actually MEETS Gaara and of course Shukaku.
D.K.-CHAN
person Charlie Fox
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG....................................you must add another chapter!!!!!!!im not even a member and im reviewing....see isnt it great!!!!im going to explode if you dont post another chapter or may be 10 more will work!!!!
person Kat
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I am loving how this story is sos far... ^^ Please update sometime!
person LadyApollonia
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, for the love everything Naruto, update this. I thought Hinata was gonna die! Creepy fic. Love it.
person Tall tree-san
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I just love the first three chappies. I'm glad you decided to bring it back, ff.net doesn't deserve it. Besides with AFF.net you can go all out with the nastiness, naughtiness, and gore all you want! No restrictions in your stories, thats the beauty of AFF.net!! Anyway keep up the good work, and please update as soon as you can :D!
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really interesting! I would love to read more of it! Finally, a fic where I feel Gaara is more in character (even though this was when he was darker, right?) I like the darker Gaara more, 'cause I'm weird. Update soon! I'll be checking up on it!
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so far! Hope you update soon, I'd love to know what happens next...