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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you kind of suck. I have read 2 of your stories now and both were really good, but UNFINISHED! Annoying. Your being a tease and I am suffering for it. Seriously though these are good and I want to know what happens... finnish this one maybe? Please?
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I was hoping you might continue this?
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok. i finally, cracked and read this one too. and it's just as amazing as all the others. do you think you will be continuing it? it's beautiful. the characterizations are beautiful!
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this story I really enjoy it.
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story. Well written, the reader is given a different prespective of Sasuke and Naruto's relationship through the eyes of person who really doesn't know them.
It's a good read and I look forward to the next chapter.
It's a good read and I look forward to the next chapter.
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I'm not even sure what my favorite part is, though I'm sure it involves Sasuke bribing Naruto with ramen! That was so awesome. Your writing is excellent; I can just see everything in my mind's eye. I hope you continue!
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start!! I'm hooked. Hope to see more soon.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It gets a bit confusing in the middle when Naruto goes under the bed the second time, but other than that it is well written. I am looking forward to you continueing this. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome read, interested to see what else you write. :D
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a really cool story. i like how naruto would crawl under the bed that was so cute. and him making the copies of himself and team hebi was brilliant. my favorite part had to be when sasuke asked naruto about sai's interest in his penis that was hilarious. this is a hoot i can't wait to see the next chapter.