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for Birthday Wishes

by KageKitsuneXXX

person CkA
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL - love it!
person Getayaoilover
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Now go to the corner of the street, hold that up and smile.”

Written across the paper in bold kanji was ‘IN NEED OF GIRLFRIEND, APPLY WITHIN’.

That was my favorite line, so freaking hilarious, I love your work.
(^_^)
person Allys
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww LMAO!! Too Cute! Sasuke-bastard is just waaay too cute in this XD. And Naruto is just waay oblivious! *snickers*. I do love the premise though. And I love it even more that Sasuke and ero-sennin already knew. It's so damn nice to see you writing again! *Hugs*. Psychadellic Sasuke is hilarious and I've never loved Sai more in my life, hell I even have mad love for Sakura and Ino in this!! Can't blame a girl for trying! My favourite line of the story goes to Naruto and read something like this - "Sasuke, do you remember when we were eight and I told you not to play with girls cause they had cooties?..." LMAO!! That was the greatest! *Huggles you to bits* We all know Sasuke loved his present XD.