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for Invisible Touch

by MoveThemHands

person Suki
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely beautiful. The way you set that all up sent chills down my spine and set up a perfect mood and situation. I really hope that you are planning to write another chapter to this one because this is a keeper! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
person getd0rky
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness oh my goodness thats so sweet and sad and sooooooo sad. i want more! gah! so well written too you stingy talented minx. I'm jealous of your brain. bring more goodness! i will draw you a pretty!! ....bribery works right? >_<
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was pretty intense and tragic! O_O

Im a cold hearted bitch and even I was all like "omg!"

Great job! Keep up the excellent work!
person You Know, Sara, YOU KNOW
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it even more here than reading the one in my email ^_^

Great job.... but... I wanna hear how he got that birthmark....

Sasuke is so cute... now... make him an emo bastard! Let's time skip a litte, oh, say... Until Naruto has got puberty under his belt, then it can be really fun :)

I LOVE YOU SARA
person Akina
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* You never listen to me... but, whatever floats your boar. XD
Amazing story, Sara! I loved it, I really did... but, if only you would have LISTENED TO ME FOR ONCE!
*coughs* Anyhoo, nicely done, my love! ^_^
P.S. I CAME UP WITH THE TITLE, PEOPLE! XD
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story looks to be very interesting. I love how you kept everything believable. I can't wait to read more.
=)
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Such an intense and good beginning!!
I cannot wait to see where you go with it. Poor little Sasuke. I wanted to cry for him through the whole thing. And he named Naruto...
And because I have you here... ummm... I miss Little Drummer Boy! *cries*
But, looking forward to whatever you write.