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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok... how to begin .:sigh:.
let me ramble (that I do the best) I found your fic... I don't know when (probably on the week) but I save it on my computer to read it after as I was on my job at the time (don't worry I erased it now) so it was early today when I open the word document and started to read. I must say that I f* hate death-fics and I don't like that much angst endings (I can stand chapters though)... so when I started to read I asked to myself if I wanted to keep reading or not... and against the odds I did.
gods I don't know if I made the right choice or not... I mean I always find estrange a suicide!Naruto but you start to read and you just can't stop, you have a very fluid style... the way Kakashi finds him, in a way he seems to be mad at him, how he is admitted to the hospital and how he can easily fool the doctor, the way he fools Iruka too, it was so easy for him... the wait and the longing he has to kill himself to be able to see Sasuke again.
But what really killed me was the end... literally, I said “oh gods” and started to cry
I don’t know if I hate you or if I should worship you... really... I know this probably is gonna be the weirdest review you’ll ever get... I should made up my mind hahaha XD.
it was great... but in its greatness I'm sad...
I demand a hot!happy-ended!SasuNaru (or NaruSasu)!smut!!!
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let me ramble (that I do the best) I found your fic... I don't know when (probably on the week) but I save it on my computer to read it after as I was on my job at the time (don't worry I erased it now) so it was early today when I open the word document and started to read. I must say that I f* hate death-fics and I don't like that much angst endings (I can stand chapters though)... so when I started to read I asked to myself if I wanted to keep reading or not... and against the odds I did.
gods I don't know if I made the right choice or not... I mean I always find estrange a suicide!Naruto but you start to read and you just can't stop, you have a very fluid style... the way Kakashi finds him, in a way he seems to be mad at him, how he is admitted to the hospital and how he can easily fool the doctor, the way he fools Iruka too, it was so easy for him... the wait and the longing he has to kill himself to be able to see Sasuke again.
But what really killed me was the end... literally, I said “oh gods” and started to cry
I don’t know if I hate you or if I should worship you... really... I know this probably is gonna be the weirdest review you’ll ever get... I should made up my mind hahaha XD.
it was great... but in its greatness I'm sad...
I demand a hot!happy-ended!SasuNaru (or NaruSasu)!smut!!!
^-^
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing, I wish I could favorite somehow.
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
glad that nudge was given this is a great story, the pain you display is wonderful. Thanks for writing and posting it, it made me cry .
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's rare that I read suicide fics. They always depress me sinc one of the characters always gives up without much reason. This is one of the first one where I see the reasoning behind why Naruto does what he does. Who wouldn't feel extreme guilt and self loathing over the fact that they killed their own lover? I'm very impressed at the level of execusion that was displayed in this story. Naruto didn't choose suicide right away and that made him more reallistic, made the reader feel more for him. I was crying when Naruto saw Sasuke the first time he almost died. I could feel the desperation that Naruto felt. I can't say that I was happy by the time I was done reading this fic, you really can't feel that here. I can say that it made me think and that I was pleased with how it was written. I can't wait to see more from you. Let's hope your other stories are a little happier!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
D: Poor Naruto... and Sasuke. I was real close to crying, and that last line nearly pushed me off the edge.
You have a lovely writing style, I'll make sure to look out for your stories in the future ^^
Oh, and welcome to our Naruto Fandom ;D
You have a lovely writing style, I'll make sure to look out for your stories in the future ^^
Oh, and welcome to our Naruto Fandom ;D
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I usually find suicide fics too melodramatic for my taste but this one actually made sense. Thankfully it kept away from the overdone and very cheesy "you don't love me so I'm going to kill myself" bit.
His motivation was much deeper and more understandable to me. It's no stretch to imagine the psychological effects of that kind of traumatic event. And the fact that nobody took his confessions at face value, and therefore couldn't actually give him the help that he needed, is the true tragedy.
Your execution was flawless. It draws the reader in and keeps them in that slide between real and imagined that Naruto would have been experiencing. The attitude and distortion of logic came off very believably. The pace and the abrupt cut off after the revelation at the end was perfect. All in all, very powerfully written and well worth the read.
His motivation was much deeper and more understandable to me. It's no stretch to imagine the psychological effects of that kind of traumatic event. And the fact that nobody took his confessions at face value, and therefore couldn't actually give him the help that he needed, is the true tragedy.
Your execution was flawless. It draws the reader in and keeps them in that slide between real and imagined that Naruto would have been experiencing. The attitude and distortion of logic came off very believably. The pace and the abrupt cut off after the revelation at the end was perfect. All in all, very powerfully written and well worth the read.