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for Inner Obstacle

by ednama

person Turacy Nage
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope Naruto can hold his tongue, lol asking to much, when Gaara confronts him after the letter. look forward to reading what happens next. Nice fic.
person Turacy Nage
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This one(Inner Circle)happy ending please. Then a sequel where everything goes bad if you must.
person MeLaiya
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
glad its been updated finally. Please keep up the good work and update soon
person LadyPiro
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Happyending!Happyending!Happyending!Happyending!Happyending!

p.s....Gaara doing impressions of Naruto? I know it was a bad time, but man...I nearly laughed my head off..
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm fine with either ending, as long as Gaara is with Naruto.
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes it would bother me!!!
Stories should always have happy endings, even if the ride is rough as all hell.
person aoh
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay! can't wait for the next chapter!
person Traybell
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapters really like your story so far. wonder what naruto is banging on the door about poor gaara is nervous. hope you continue and write chap 3.
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Good fic!

I love how Gaara's more worn out by his niece and nephew than by his enemies...but he and Naruto have to make up!

Now!
person MeLaiya
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhh. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!