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for Inner Obstacle

by ednama

person Anon
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gaara thinks Naruto went too far. But i think Gaara shouldve just confessed to wanting him instead of going out and screwing random people. Everybody knows that Naruto is usually too dense to figure things out for himself, he needs a little help in that area sometimes.
person Word_Slave
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story! I'm really liking the way you took the time to set it up. But damn, that was a horrible way to end it. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Slave
person LadyPiro
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Garra!
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto :( I bet that really stung *huggles him* Shame on Gaara, he should know the only person he needs to be kissin is Naruto :P
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good. I hope you update soon! Naruto is pissed, but I don't think its OOC, its a nice change from having him running off crying or just acting like its all cool.
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say someone is JEALOUS!!!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooh very intresting story i gotta say its really good and hope u update soon so i may partake in this wordie goodnees jejee
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh HELL yes!

This fic rocks!

Update!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this one too. Yeah! Naruto is a meanie that's different AND I like it You've got GREAT Ideas for your stories.
person despairs
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an awesome first chapter. Its been a really long time since i've been this anxious to read more of a story. You got my total attention...please continue.

Oh and for the record, in my personal opinion i dont think Naruto was a meanie at all. He was shocked, hurt and pissed off and to me thats totally understandable.