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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
5 stars. Thats what this chapter earns. (Plus, maybe like, one extra star for the quick update.)
Oh, and bonus stars for the awkward, painful inexperienced sex. I wasn't expecting Sasuke's freakout at the end, but it worked so well and I loved the switch up of Naruto becoming the strong one in their relationship. Naruto's been such a reck that its easy to see that Sasuke's just as equally fucked up, even if he doesn't show it.
Keep up the excellent work! ^^
Oh, and bonus stars for the awkward, painful inexperienced sex. I wasn't expecting Sasuke's freakout at the end, but it worked so well and I loved the switch up of Naruto becoming the strong one in their relationship. Naruto's been such a reck that its easy to see that Sasuke's just as equally fucked up, even if he doesn't show it.
Keep up the excellent work! ^^
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think we ever discussed, and this is as good place as any, your titles, and how much I absolutely adore them. Whenever you send my a new chapter, even when I don't have time to read it right away, I just have to open it to see the new chapter title. They inspire me so much.
I was very disappointed you decided not to do that for the other two stories, I have to say, though I see why it wouldn't work as well.
Thank you, once again, for contributing to this fandome something not only readable, but utterly brilliant; the greatest quality possible.
I was very disappointed you decided not to do that for the other two stories, I have to say, though I see why it wouldn't work as well.
Thank you, once again, for contributing to this fandome something not only readable, but utterly brilliant; the greatest quality possible.
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so those people won't be reprimanded? They need to die!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed this story since the beginning! Sorry about being selfish and not reviewing!
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Naruto and Sasuke are so cute with one anotehr. =^^=
That nightmare of his, was howver, really scary. Great job all around on the chapter.
As for the A/N.. I do agree with you that there are a lot of stories on here with ubsurd rape stories. Personally, I love rape and abuse fics, but only because its gives the characters something insurmountable to overcome and because it is an obstical that drastically changes their characters on a believeable level. Its a horror and a struggle.
Stories in which the characters go from rape to love in 0.2 seconds loose my interest just as quickly. Keep up the great work and don't hold back on your stories for reviews. Beging for reviews has a tendency to stop active reviewers from reviewing. I hate it when authors keep a story hostage when they don't get a certin number of reviews. :(
That nightmare of his, was howver, really scary. Great job all around on the chapter.
As for the A/N.. I do agree with you that there are a lot of stories on here with ubsurd rape stories. Personally, I love rape and abuse fics, but only because its gives the characters something insurmountable to overcome and because it is an obstical that drastically changes their characters on a believeable level. Its a horror and a struggle.
Stories in which the characters go from rape to love in 0.2 seconds loose my interest just as quickly. Keep up the great work and don't hold back on your stories for reviews. Beging for reviews has a tendency to stop active reviewers from reviewing. I hate it when authors keep a story hostage when they don't get a certin number of reviews. :(
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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I've been away. And I didn't have any access to the Internet. Yes, that really sucked, I know.
I love both of your fics and I'm really suprised that more people aren't reviewing. You deserve the credit, you really do, especially when you're going through the trouble of writing them and posting them on the site. And since your chapters always are detailed, you must have spent a lot of time writing them. So, forgive me. And please remember that there are people who appreciate you and your fics.
A lot of people are just too lazy to write reviews, I'm not one of them though, I like to write them because I know that the author appreciate it. And it's kinda fun too.. ;P
And now, onto the reviewing of the new chapter.
This chapter was really cute. I really loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. I especially like the piano part, and when Naruto writes kanji on Sasuke's hand. So cute.
And the more I read the fic, the more I begin to like Sasuke. He's so credible eventhough he's changing. I would like to see this side of him in the real manga.
And of course, being the pervert that I am, the sensual interaction between the two, rocked. I'm excitingly waiting for more. XD
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
I love both of your fics and I'm really suprised that more people aren't reviewing. You deserve the credit, you really do, especially when you're going through the trouble of writing them and posting them on the site. And since your chapters always are detailed, you must have spent a lot of time writing them. So, forgive me. And please remember that there are people who appreciate you and your fics.
A lot of people are just too lazy to write reviews, I'm not one of them though, I like to write them because I know that the author appreciate it. And it's kinda fun too.. ;P
And now, onto the reviewing of the new chapter.
This chapter was really cute. I really loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. I especially like the piano part, and when Naruto writes kanji on Sasuke's hand. So cute.
And the more I read the fic, the more I begin to like Sasuke. He's so credible eventhough he's changing. I would like to see this side of him in the real manga.
And of course, being the pervert that I am, the sensual interaction between the two, rocked. I'm excitingly waiting for more. XD
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
These last two chapters were perfect! Incredible! Gah!
I'd review more, but reading this has made me late for work.
Keep up the great work!
These last two chapters were perfect! Incredible! Gah!
I'd review more, but reading this has made me late for work.
Keep up the great work!
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was just so sweet, Sasuke can try and fight it but his feeling for Naruto just get stronger and they are perfect together ^_^
I liked how you introduced the sign language in this chapter, it fits the story perfectly!! I think this is the second story I've read where Naruto doesn't talk and uses sign language, I don't know why but I like the idea.
Naruto a music genius, I don't think anybody expected that! I love the piano and I think it goes well with how your developing the story and Naruto and Sasuke's relationship.
Looking forward to the next chapter, I really love this story.
Abhorsen3 ^_^
I liked how you introduced the sign language in this chapter, it fits the story perfectly!! I think this is the second story I've read where Naruto doesn't talk and uses sign language, I don't know why but I like the idea.
Naruto a music genius, I don't think anybody expected that! I love the piano and I think it goes well with how your developing the story and Naruto and Sasuke's relationship.
Looking forward to the next chapter, I really love this story.
Abhorsen3 ^_^
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ya know, i've always prided myself on being able to admit when i'm wrong .. so here i am! i cannot believe i actually was put off of this story simply beccause of the title. it's not a bad one, just didn't catch my eye. so today i read and am thinking YEAH BABY!!!!!
omg, this is such a totally cool fic and i'm so ashamed i'm just now reading it. you're doing a really good job and i promise to keep a close eye out for updates. ;-)
omg, this is such a totally cool fic and i'm so ashamed i'm just now reading it. you're doing a really good job and i promise to keep a close eye out for updates. ;-)
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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, this chapter was not what I had expected, I don't mean that in a bad way though.
You got to see more from a Sasuke-point of view, and I think that you made a really good job of making him stay in character.
And I got so pleased when they kissed, I totally squealed out loud. I had been curious to see when there would be some SasuNaru-fluff, and now my curiosity is sated ;P
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up with the good work, as always ;P
Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
You got to see more from a Sasuke-point of view, and I think that you made a really good job of making him stay in character.
And I got so pleased when they kissed, I totally squealed out loud. I had been curious to see when there would be some SasuNaru-fluff, and now my curiosity is sated ;P
Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up with the good work, as always ;P
Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs