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Okay, so this has to be the absolutely best training-turns-into-kissing scene I've ever read. Not only it was beautifully written, I could just see it clearly in my head, like I was watching a movie.
It figures that, even broken, Naruto is stronger then Sasuke when it comes to emotion and love. He always will be the stronger one. But if he talked, the chapter would have probably ended up with a huge fight and I want to see them train again. Soon. From Sasuke's pov! XD

And you know what I think of Grape Valley. =D

Sasuke thinks the world revolves around him.

Can't wait to see what happens in their little vacation spot by the sea. Keep up the good work!

It always makes me happy to know that my reviews are appreciated. And like I said before, no need to thank me or anything, I'm just stating a fact ;P
This chapter, to me, showed your more poetic side, I think. The chapter was like a dream, romanticly written, detailed, just with a nice flow and easy-going-ness. It's hard to explain, but I really enjoyed it.
I also think that you portrayed Kakashi really well, I totally see him like the way you described him. ;P
And I really like Sasuke in this fic, you seem to justify him in a way, which is good because it makes it easier for me to like him. And I feel so sorry for Naruto, you're able to portray his emotions really well. It's so enjoyable to read, honestly.
I'm greatful for the quick update, I thought I would have to wait longer :) so thank you! It made me really happy.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing,(this fic and your novel).
Take care. Hugs

I really enjoyed this chapter. It was nice to see Hinata be brave and admit her feelings towards Naruto. I also enjoyed the way Sasuke is acting here. Kakashi just steamrolling over him and his actions during the festival. It was nice that he wasnt all possesive, and he just waited to see what would happen. The ending of the chapter was very touching and emotional.

You don't have to thank me for telling the truth while reviewing, you know, you should be proud of yourself, to be able to write in this amazing way. Not only can you write you know, but you have quite the imagination as well. I've actually started writing a fic myself, but I'm really bad at it so I never seem to finish it O///O(me blushing). So I know talent when I see it, cause it is incredibly hard to write, so you deserve all the compliments you get ;)
Anyway...on to the reviewing of the chapter itself, I can easily say that this chapter was one of the best chapters of this fic. I really loved the ending. It was perfect. And your descriptions of Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke left me speachless again. I liked that you made Hinata brave enough to tell Naruto about her true feelings, as well as how vulnerable Naruto is at the moment, the way he acts, and that Sasuke realized that he does feel something for Naruto. The first thing that came to my mind, after reading the chapter, was "awww.." XD cause I found it really cute.
And I don't mind if I have to wait for a while to read the next chapters, because I totally understand why. It takes a lot of one's freetime to write fics/novels/chapters etc. and you do want to do other stuff as well, not just write fanfics all day ;)
As they say in Sweden "you never wait too long, when you wait for something good". I don't know if other countries use this saying as well but we use it quite a lot here in Sweden, ok maybe not a lot, but it is a known saying :)
Anyway.......with that I mean that I'll be happy as long as you update, no matter how long it'll take.
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

I have to say that it has been a very long time since I've read such a great story!!

I love the way you're portraying their characters and the way the story is developing. I've been trying to see if I can see where you're going with this story but with every chapter I read I realised that whatever I thought of was not anywhere as good as what you'd writen.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter now and I can't wait till you update, I know you've heard it before but I really love this story ^_^

Aw, a sad Naruto always makes me down. ;(


Great chapter. You are an excellent writer. If you ever finish your novel, make sure you provide a link to it. ^^
Keep up the great work!

Gah!!! So much has happened between the last two chapters, that I am in need of a break because of the emotional rollercoaster I just sat through. My god. Can't wait for your next updated. This really is an amazing story.


Keep up the great work!

Once again, excellent work! I managed to hold out for two chapters this time, of course I still wanted more at the end of it. You almost had me in tears for poor Naruto. Thanks for sharing.

WOW....this an amazing story i cant wait for the next chap